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the champ , Who? -This style is brand new ..

Postby J Roc » Jun 15th, '09, 05:02

to think i wanted to see , All of it please -ur a virgin pussy , one cock it'll bleed , Obviously , i'm what u wanted to be , No hate in mine , Take ur time -ur chances is short .. like Asian Eyes , Stay in time , or Part With J , cause my Heart Contains , darkened space , and it's hard embraced , that it' outsmarts my brain , this is my darkest day , Give it some time , a minute is fine -watch out , for these cynical lines , woman'll cry , no shit givin this time , watch out , i'm sick of ur lies , to think that im high , while im writing this shit , it's nor important , timing just is -i'd think i just won the lotto , lightning just hit

i dunno just a Pilot of my new style haha .
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Re: the champ , Who? -This style is brand new ..

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jun 15th, '09, 08:07

it's nice j roc , i liked it ,, keep it up :y:
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