UNIQUE VERSE!

[James R.]

That was tight. The rhyming was a little simpler than you usually do, but it worked for this. I liked the route you took on the whole verse. Kind of like the bad side of your conscience talking a lot of the time. The truth or dare part in the beginning was hot. Drew me in, would probably sound dope on audio. Can't wait to hear the song.

[Steve Spag]

Deffinetly a nice piece, man! I like the little bits before and after the main part of the verse too, very clever. Like James said, the vocab. was a little more basic than usual, but that didn't stop your awesome wordplay. Sometimes simple is better, and this seems to be one of those cases. Can't wait to hear it flow on beat, sounds like it'll be pretty dope!

[mcZu]

That was tight. The rhyming was a little simpler than you usually do, but it worked for this. I liked the route you took on the whole verse. Kind of like the bad side of your conscience talking a lot of the time. The truth or dare part in the beginning was hot. Drew me in, would probably sound dope on audio. Can't wait to hear the song.

Co sign. Enjoyable piece, good job.

[Spyder]

pretty short and ya got simple for u lol but yea man i liked it, good job playa

[Slim Zaddy]

i like your humor in the verses ,, short and sick ,, keep it up bro

[Arabian Shady]

short and sweet, i guess its a lil too simple tho, i'm used to the complex shit you write, that stuff is crazy man
all in all quite enjoyable tho
Peace

[Emadyville]

That was tight. The rhyming was a little simpler than you usually do, but it worked for this. I liked the route you took on the whole verse. Kind of like the bad side of your conscience talking a lot of the time. The truth or dare part in the beginning was hot. Drew me in, would probably sound dope on audio. Can't wait to hear the song.

James said pretty much everything I felt after reading this. Very unique like you titled it, very impressive