Standin with You [needs chorus]

[mcZu]

Sorry for the late feed, didn't have much time free last couple of days.

That said, this piece is great. My favorite verse would probably be the third. Content was great, deep shit full with emotion. Choice of words is excellent, multies were there and the way you portrayed it, with the three separate verses covering the three periods, is great. Flow seemed on-point.

What's left is a good choice of beat. And a fitting delivery, and of course a chorus.

Keep this shit up.

[James R.]

Thanks for the feed Zu, I appreciate it. Yeah I need to get a hook that really fits the song. Maybe I'll do it as though someone is going to sing on it, but I haven't really decided which way to take that. Thanks again to everyone who checked.