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I hate you bitch

Postby gutawafang » Jun 17th, '09, 03:01

My beautifully sick notes can musically slit throats
Turning any dick quotes into dirty fucking big jokes
And I can be the nightmare that invades your dreams
I'll always be right there, see my face and you'll scream
You'll always cry and beg for the key
To the handcuffs I tie to the bed for the thrill
Tonight you will die, best believe this is real
For all the fucking lies, and the beef we conceal

I can't grip me, because you can't keep me
You bleed me, because you can't beat me
You don't need me, but you scar so deeply
I hate you bitch, for every bar you flip me

Don't exist then, I did not have lyrical twists then
But now you see my mis-sion, this is all I envisioned
I'll burn you tonight, for Devil's delight
I'll learn how to fight, for evil's foresight
You'll be stabbed now in this rap vow
This is to fix the gap I'll, mix the scraps now
I've been eating your words now I got hiccups
It's been shit and it hurts, hatred I pick up

And this scoreshit I play, you ain't appreciate
This is your shit I lay, you ain't negotiate
It is fate, die now on the bed
I hate you bitch for every word that you said

Short verses but strong enough the lord curses
I see too bored faces, the chords faded
My thoughts invaded, by your shots I evaded
I stupidly waited for this music to jade it
But insanity takes over now, it's over now
I'll throw her down, sew her gown
Twice I said it, lies i get it
I don't buy your ciggarettes, I'd die regretting

Gems can never spark me, so fuck me
Don't try to talk to me, or touh me
Honestly, till the day that I die, FUCK ME
I HATE YOU BITCH WHEN YOU SAID "FUCK ME!"
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Re: I hate you bitch

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 17th, '09, 08:36

dmn wheres all this anger coming from by the way dope man...liking the multis
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Re: I hate you bitch

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jun 17th, '09, 11:13

damn, it's the best i have seen form ya so far ,, really it's sick i liked it ,, it got an angry emotions and sick multies ,, dope man ,, keep writing this way ,, and keep it up ,, 9/10 ,, :worship:
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Re: I hate you bitch

Postby gutawafang » Jun 18th, '09, 02:09

Thanks for the comments guys. :happy:
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