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Re: Escape Pod - New verse + hooks

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 19th, '09, 03:45

Damn man, great shit! Could feel the deepness it is, and the flow was outstanding as usual. Lyrics were great, real powerfull stuff. Can't wait to hear an audio, should sound great!

Keep it up bro!
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Re: Escape Pod - New verse + hooks

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jun 19th, '09, 11:39

damn bro ... it's sick ,, hahahaha ,, i loved it .. :y:
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Re: Escape Pod - New verse + hooks

Postby lilrossy » Jun 19th, '09, 13:36

nice work, i really liked it. this recorded would make a great song hey. keep up the good work. :y:
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
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After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Escape Pod - New verse + hooks

Postby JMG » Jun 20th, '09, 06:00

that was deep man 10/10
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Re: Escape Pod - New verse + hooks

Postby gutawafang » Jun 20th, '09, 11:52

Wanna hear it man. The lyrics are dope. :y:
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Re: Escape Pod - New verse + hooks

Postby Yah-hah » Jun 20th, '09, 13:21

Yo man the flow was nice and on point for sure but the content was really tight. I dig the "why didnt god just split us from the beginning that was fresh
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
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Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
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Re: Escape Pod - New verse + hooks

Postby SajN » Jun 20th, '09, 14:59

Wackest I've seen :worship: :worship: :worship:
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