NEW Steve Spag Verse

[Steve Spag]

While I was at the studio yesterday my buddy started fuckin' around with the keyboard and came up with this really unique beat. I wrote my verse in about 10 minutes, and I thought I'd share it with you guys since I havn't really been posting here in the CW Section as much as I'd like to. I WARN YOU, you might not get the flow, because the beat is pretty complex, and each word I say has it's own little part on it so the melody matches up. I don't have the beat to show you, but hopefully you'll get the flow. I should have an audio for this sometime in the future, it's gonna be on a friend's album.

i don't care about your thoughts, or what you heard about me
because every time i see you you just always run your jaw
so drop it down you little bitch, so you could give me head a bit
you know that i ain't celebet, so come on grab my cock
it's clear to see your jealousy has got the better part of you
but do not talk about my music like it ain't a job
i'm really soo intelligent, your intrest in me's geniune
you're saying that i'm dumb, but i'm bound to prove you wrong
if i see you with your boyfriend i'll be shooting you the finger
see the look inside my eyes? yeah you know you better run
'cause you know that i'll act stupid, physically i won't abuse ya'
mentally you know it's over, tell me how you like me hun
and if your man has any problems, you know that i'm gonna solve 'em
he's a punk ass little pussy and he dresses like a bum
so anytime you wanna holla, you know that i won't be bothered
'cause you're worth about a dolla, while i'm a million bucks

Copyright: Steven Spagnuolo 2009

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[Vettori]

Yea yo I agree with maybe on that. Nice and differant, The first time i read it i was like huh, but when yu rap it The right way its sick...and the words stood out better, and included Meaning as well.
Cool shit man, lookin forwardd to a raw recording of this So you can maybe Show some others here who may not catch it, plus then i could listen to it rather then read it all the time PCe man good job

[James R.]

Like I said before, the flow is genius once you catch on to it. The general outline of the song is interesting, and it has some really stand out lines. Overall, it's a 10/10 for me. I'd say 9/10 for the lyrics, but the flow blew me away. Also, it's quite original considering the concept.

Exactly

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed guys, it's really appreciated! Looks like I'm going to have to smuggle a rough-copy out of the studio sometime when I record this, muahahaha.

Keep the feed coming, please!

[Rain Matrix]

I liked it it took awhile to catch the scheme of the flow but it's definitly there and it's nice
good job

[Epidemik]

Nice Steve. Took a bit to get the rhyme scheme for me as well.. but definitly dope once you catch on.
Hopefully u drop the audio soon.

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thanks guys, glad you're diggin' it!

[Solace]

Great piece, liked the flow. Can't wait to hear an audio