Don't Give Up

[lilrossy]

Jus a ruff draft, wrote it pretty quick but let me know wat ya thinks so far.

Real talk, im sic of life, i can't take it anymore,
find my self everynite, down at the liquor stroe,
lookin for, an easy way 2 get away, then i hit da floor,
tears fall, it's like groundhog day, ive been here before,
lifes cum 2 a locked door, nd i cant find the key,
wanna beat a retreat, on my knees, i need 2 find my feet,
take a seat, sit back, take a look at me nd who i be,
like growin in ya sleep, i was changin nd i couldn't even see,
im jus a man in the street, with fuckin pain in his heart,
but thru da cracks of da concrete, grew a rose, dats a start,
but u could see dat it was scarred, but believe me, ima go far,
life's jus had a slow start, like a fat kid inside a go kart,
no matter who u are, don't give up, trust me i've been there,
when a chords been struck, or someones jus let ur flare,
when lifes unfair, jus stay aware, dat everyone has someone who cares,
i'll tell ya what, everynite i'll say a prayer, till were both walkin on air.

[Slim Zaddy]

i liked it ,, it can be better if you give it more time ,, but concept is nice ,,

[lilrossy]

thanks man

[Fa-Q]

its got that Nas flow...good shit