... :high: .... ! .. Pt.4 :: J's back

[J Roc]

That diss u MADE IT WAS OBVIOUS. i BLAZE IN THE CHRONIC BITCH Till my Lungs-Have-Smog
Name ya baby after "Rugrats-Dog" So there's no Shame After i'm 'SHAKING' THE "SPOT" AGAIN!!!
Think ya Bars-have-class Till u "Cross"-My-Path And Start PRAYING FOR GOD U WIN!!!
(I'm MAKING U PROTESTANT!) ... Lmao! Everything u SAY IS JUST GARBAGE BITCH .
u Facing the Swagga-King so after u battle-him u better Off STAYING ANONYMOUS!!!!
..... .... J WITH THE "SAUCYNESS" cause you "DIPPING" LIKE NACHO'S!
SIGNALS IS ALMOST Telling him u-is-hopeless and Too-devoted to SPITTING ON COMPS , YO .
KID U IS AWFUL I'm not KIDDING YOU OCK , NO! u the Type to just talk SHIT & JUST NOT GO
So Pipe-Down-u-reject we'll "Find-Out-You-Cheating" Like the MIDDLE OF TALK SHOWS!!!
Talk-Slow or we'll see u "Gone-Ghost" To the point where even ya PICTURE IS NOT SHOWN!!!
(Ohhh Waaiitt) I got SYPHILIS HOT FLOWS & Punches far as ROCKY'S STRIKES GO!
Taking on ROC WITH LIGHTBULBS?? It'll COST THE TITLE
Keep your Mind-On-Rap Cuz if u think ur Rhymes-is-"phat" u shoulda GOT SOME LYPO!!!


*Lightwork*....Match My Bar's ...

[Ka0t1c]

it's good, i like most of it, those lines are clever/funny

[James R.]

Dude wtf happened to you? You used to be on top of that punchline shit and now everything you do sounds forced as fuck. You having some writers block or smtn? You cosigning yourself is just annoying, you're still stuck on the caps lock. Nothing on there compared to your other shit is anything special at all. It's very average and that shot you took at anonymous took literally no thought at all. You can do better than this shit.

[JMG]

your lungs are smog no wonder u spit pollution (LMFAO!!)
your kinda dope but sometimes ur shit gets confusing
undisputed? u aint a champ all that talk is SELF PROCLAIMED
always goin on about light work i guess ur WELTERWEIGHT (WHAT?!)
your just a fruad and your BELT IS FAKE your a punch LINE CROOK
leaving teeth marks all up in cassidy's RHYME BOOK (OH SHIT)

no hate

[J Roc]

Dude wtf happened to you? You used to be on top of that punchline shit and now everything you do sounds forced as fuck. You having some writers block or smtn? You cosigning yourself is just annoying, you're still stuck on the caps lock. Nothing on there compared to your other shit is anything special at all. It's very average and that shot you took at anonymous took literally no thought at all. You can do better than this shit.

I kinda got writer's block , Roc's Rusty as shit right about now just trying to knock it all off with these "..... :high: .... ! ...." Keystyles .... this 1 ain't really , just working on my multies this time ..... just some practise before i start killing it again lol ...... Thanks for reading duke i appreciate getting help from an ill dude Same to you Kaotic ...

& lol @ getting murked in my own Thread , @ JMG

[MC Anonymous]

Dude wtf happened to you? You used to be on top of that punchline shit and now everything you do sounds forced as fuck. You having some writers block or smtn? You cosigning yourself is just annoying, you're still stuck on the caps lock. Nothing on there compared to your other shit is anything special at all. It's very average and that shot you took at anonymous took literally no thought at all. You can do better than this shit.

I kinda got writer's block , Roc's Rusty as shit right about now just trying to knock it all off with these "..... :high: .... ! ...." Keystyles .... this 1 ain't really , just working on my multies this time ..... just some practise before i start killing it again lol ...... Thanks for reading duke i appreciate getting help from an ill dude Same to you Kaotic ...

& lol @ getting murked in my own Thread , @ JMG

That subliminal against me will not be unaccounted for.

[James R.]

Dude wtf happened to you? You used to be on top of that punchline shit and now everything you do sounds forced as fuck. You having some writers block or smtn? You cosigning yourself is just annoying, you're still stuck on the caps lock. Nothing on there compared to your other shit is anything special at all. It's very average and that shot you took at anonymous took literally no thought at all. You can do better than this shit.

I kinda got writer's block , Roc's Rusty as shit right about now just trying to knock it all off with these "..... :high: .... ! ...." Keystyles .... this 1 ain't really , just working on my multies this time ..... just some practise before i start killing it again lol ...... Thanks for reading duke i appreciate getting help from an ill dude Same to you Kaotic ...

& lol @ getting murked in my own Thread , @ JMG

Aight bro that's what I figured. Just keep droppin the keystyles and it'll come back to you. Maybe even try to do a str8 up topical song. That might even help get the creativity flowing.