Keystyle-Practice shit

[Just Silver]

Kill metaphors that ive never met before
I handle whores like dismantled doors
and breakem off all hard or soft
and twist bones all crush then pop
creativity killin me inside and out
if i make one false move let the truth behold
cuz it takes a mistake to fold bold text
and wonder if it should be itallic next
---something extremely small with no thought process
but need help on how to structure my bars!

[Just Silver]

that was not bad structure, good first drop man? keep it up, how long you been at it?

thanx i have been freestyling verbally for four years but i suck with the text for making it flow

[Just Silver]

flow wasn't bad, no one will call you out for that in this section (often)

4 years? I think I'm still in the months lol, how old are you???

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