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Unhuman(keystyle)

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Unhuman(keystyle)

Postby Just Silver » Jun 28th, '09, 23:54

I dont have morals to back me up
call you damn oral cuz the fact you suck
you say im just like a normal person
i dont understand because your verse aint workin
i get back on all fours and howl
im a beast i can rap with no vowels
the bitch on all fours as well
and i be killin em faster than i could sell
try and be a savior
stack paper like math majors
throw a bunch a freestyled spit
callem outrageous
off the damn chain call me a pendant
fuck ebert and roper they wouldnt recommend it
so i go in caves to my descendants
where i belong for songs and making havoc
thats all thats it fuck that fuck this
im not? what is? human or not
one chance one shot
whether i am or not just give it time and i might be here
or just left behind
(keystyle-never could sit and just write lol)
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Re: Unhuman(keystyle)

Postby gutawafang » Jun 29th, '09, 02:36

Nice keystyle, Silver. I could flow to it quite well. 9/10 after reading it twice. Props for vocab usage in a keystle man. :y:
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