Am I Good Enuff?

[lilrossy]

Jus something i wrote the otha day bout one of my best mates goin out wit a girl i really like.

justa teen, already learnt that love can be so mean,
watchin anotha guy come in between of my dream,
im on my knees prayin to a god i don't believe in,
but the pain won't ease, everytime i see them, i wanna be them,
i need some freedom, and i've tryed to walk away,
but it's hard when ur in love, so i deal wit it every day,
feelings thrown astray, burried in side, left unsaid,
thru the nite, all the things u say are thru my head,
i try to forget, but i jus want u so much,
i feel complete everytime we talk, everytime we touch,
wit this crush i try to maintain, like nuthins botherin me,
even though my hearts full of pain, and alot of envy,
i shoulda let u know, how i felt right from the start,
cuz the pain in my heart, is fuckin tearin me apart,
cuz i love you, and if its so, my dream never comes true,
i jus wanna know, am i good enuff for u to love me too?

if u ask me, i think cupid needs to practice on his aim,
bcuz of him, i feel like dupree when he's sittin out in da rain,
how do i sustain, when im tryin not to cry,
the wind came thru nd blew out my flame in a blink of an eye,
wish i wasn't so shy, i jus wanna break this shell,
but im stuck in it, nd bcuz of it, im goin thru hell,
constantly dwell, i cant cope, listenin to james blunt,
got me wantin to say farewell, tie the rope, nd jump,
but then i see you nd it pushes the pain aside,
when u smile i feel good inside, when we hug, it feels right,
cuz i love you, nd without you im incomplete,
but i feel like babyface, cuz nobody no's it but me,
i shoulda let u know, how i felt right from the start,
cuz the pain in my heart, is fuckin tearin me apart,
cuz i love you, and if its so, my dream never comes true,
i jus wanna know, am i good enuff for u to love me too?

[gutawafang]

It's nice man. Use more multis. And flow can be improved. I applaud this.

[Slim Zaddy]

man that's good , i liked the emotions in it ,, flow is fine for an emotional staff , you have some sick lines ,, i can feel it and relate to it .. keep it up dude

[lilrossy]

thanks alot guys. this is the first time i've written anything like this so im glad uze liked it.

[Just Silver]

Jus something i wrote the otha day bout one of my best mates goin out wit a girl i really like.

justa teen, already learnt that love can be so mean,
watchin anotha guy come in between of my dream,
im on my knees prayin to a god i don't believe in,
but the pain won't ease, everytime i see them, i wanna be them,
i need some freedom, and i've tryed to walk away,
but it's hard when ur in love, so i deal wit it every day,
feelings thrown astray, burried in side, left unsaid,
thru the nite, all the things u say are thru my head,
i try to forget, but i jus want u so much,
i feel complete everytime we talk, everytime we touch,
wit this crush i try to maintain, like nuthins botherin me,
even though my hearts full of pain, and alot of envy,
i shoulda let u know, how i felt right from the start,
cuz the pain in my heart, is fuckin tearin me apart,
cuz i love you, and if its so, my dream never comes true,
i jus wanna know, am i good enuff for u to love me too?

if u ask me, i think cupid needs to practice on his aim,
bcuz of him, i feel like dupree when he's sittin out in da rain,
how do i sustain, when im tryin not to cry,
the wind came thru nd blew out my flame in a blink of an eye,
wish i wasn't so shy, i jus wanna break this shell,
but im stuck in it, nd bcuz of it, im goin thru hell,
constantly dwell, i cant cope, listenin to james blunt,
got me wantin to say farewell, tie the rope, nd jump,
but then i see you nd it pushes the pain aside,
when u smile i feel good inside, when we hug, it feels right,
cuz i love you, nd without you im incomplete,
but i feel like babyface, cuz nobody no's it but me,
i shoulda let u know, how i felt right from the start,
cuz the pain in my heart, is fuckin tearin me apart,
cuz i love you, and if its so, my dream never comes true,
i jus wanna know, am i good enuff for u to love me too?

honestly i hate the topic of love but you seemed to make a way for it to work this is great