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Peace

Postby mcZu » Jul 8th, '09, 21:34

Feedback appreciated
-Peace-

Instrumental: Just A Moment – Nas Ft Quan

Nameless due to shameless moments of violence
Strings of life like a Stradivarius violin
Various musical anthems sound violent
Moments of peace echo in the environment
Ego altered due to piece authors
We need more peace offers, middle and index
Peace isn’t a vague riddle, it’s the windex
Open up the windows, let the wind blow
Shut down windows, forget ‘bout winning dough
Focus on peaceful times, preach ‘bout seeing sounds
Drop angel dust, act like an angel without the rust
Poetical as it may sound, but just trust
Have faith ‘cause it’s the truth played, no pause
Rewinding life may be a valid cause
Second Gandhi’s intentions, intentionally mentioned
Streets should be gun free, I know it aint sweet like
Opposite of sugar free gum, see I know it aint like
Heaven, far from three sevens
Though we need to free our planet
Like Justin did with the breasts of Janet, damn it
Am I reaching like Mr. Fantastic?
Is peace that faded like Mrs. Fantastic?
The Thing is, our spirit should be on fire, ask this
Is a moment of peace really worth fighting for?
I think peace is more than just a metaphor…
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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