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Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 9th, '09, 21:35

i just want to be thru with my job
no, i don't mean to ruin this song
but issues continue to maneuver along
i think ever since i entered, my view has been wrong
now what i really need is to look into my future beyond
the army cuz i see that, well, i always knew i'm their pawn
but how i wish i was done just to follow my dream
which still isn't drawn
sometimes i got to scream cuz i could've become
a valuable human being who had found a good theme
like empowering the young to acknowledge staying strong
but i'm loud and obscene probably cuz i'm fowl mouthed and uncalm
plus overseas, i've encounter the dung, i'm unproud
i'm a puppet with strings cuz the route that i'm on
am i gonna sink down or do i belong in this scene
my body's growing numb, i found i'm not free
we all pay a fee for our father, either the devil or god
jesus is gone, when tomorrow proceeds to lead us, we'll bomb
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: hope u understand

Postby Noeezy » Jul 9th, '09, 23:30

not bad, ur getting better
keep it up :y:
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Re: hope u understand

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 9th, '09, 23:40

thanx, i've been away fom writing for a lil while, just tryna get back in it again
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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