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I redid What a Wonderful World...

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I redid What a Wonderful World...

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 10th, '09, 02:25

heres the beat http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vnRqYMTpXHc and im not totally in love with this yet


I see a face with no expression
All emotions cried out
Erased the complexion
With the oceans cried out
And I think to myself…is this really our world

I see grey skies
It’s about to rain
If all eyes cries today
Where’s the spout or drain
And I think to myself…what a sad sad world

But the rainbow will appear
After a long rain
Pain knows fear
But that’s the wrong pain
I see boys with girls
‘Til morning together
They don’t know ahead
Is storming weather
There’s a bun in the oven
But she’s all alone
And now the boys done with lovin’
And she’s got no where to call home
And I think to myself…what a lonely girl

I hear babies cry
She watches them grow
Eyes of ladies dry
And inside she rots slow
And I think to myself…whats become of this world
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