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Coleon & McZu - F.A.C. (Fuck a Chorus)

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Re: Coleon & McZu - F.A.C. (Fuck a Chorus)

Postby Drama Setter » Jul 10th, '09, 19:58

Great Job , Bros .

verbally clean and dapper, double team ya swagger, but does that shit matter
so we rip wrappers/rappers like Christmas presents the kids battered
we're spit slashers, ofCOOR's we're hardCOOR, while you cat's are that borin'
ya'll BUDs LIGHT, so we got a leg up like CAP MORGAN


this is the best part , Wohohohoho , Thx again guys , It's a dope Drop . :flower: :worship:
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Re: Coleon & McZu - F.A.C. (Fuck a Chorus)

Postby Drama Setter » Jul 10th, '09, 20:05

Coleon wrote:your welcome lol and I think I've seen someone do a BUDs LIGHT line before so I just stemmed off it and added more beer references :y:


Yea , that's what I was talking about , Thx for the job well done. :y:
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Re: Coleon & McZu - F.A.C. (Fuck a Chorus)

Postby classthe_king » Jul 10th, '09, 21:00

Hot shit, each verses seemed better then the last. I couldnt really say who did better both of you were dope as hell. You worked well together going off each other's rhymes. McZu, some of your best shit in a while.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Coleon & McZu - F.A.C. (Fuck a Chorus)

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 10th, '09, 21:34

good shit both of u, very cool collab
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Coleon & McZu - F.A.C. (Fuck a Chorus)

Postby mcZu » Jul 10th, '09, 21:45

Thanks to all for the feed, appreciate it :y:
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Re: Coleon & McZu - F.A.C. (Fuck a Chorus)

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 11th, '09, 09:26

omg i am working on a song called fucka chorus and the chorus is like

fuck a chorus
Id rather get my ass kicked by chuck norris
stuck in a forest....

lol but i couldnt think of anything else for the hook....idk i might throw it out...hey but good job
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