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"Taking out" the trash...diss ... THE ROC!!!

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"Taking out" the trash...diss ... THE ROC!!!

Postby J Roc » Jul 15th, '09, 20:26

i grab the MIC & RAP WITH EASEMENT Then Attempt to FIND CLIMAX WITH ETHER
While i'm Bumping Kanye West - "Flashing Lights" Ur the TYPE TO HAVE A SEIZURE
9 Clap-Of-Eights at your Back-&-Legs leave ya "fabric-Ate"..like all the LIES U HAVE ON ME BITCH
ur bars deCLINING 'FAST' AS CHEETAHS.. u wanna Beef?? but how can i TYPE AS FAST AS HE DID??
he told me he want's a "face off".. so he'll get the MICHEAL JACKSON TREATMENT!!! POW!!
Remember, Your TALKING TO ME... ur better off staying anonymous So we'll CALL HIM A CREEP!
SHOCKED BY YOUR MEANS I'll let a Pump,-Bake that'll "Buff-A" but u ain't "ALL I CAN EAT!!!"
i WANT YOU TO LEAVE & put this "Freak-out-in-a-Room" Without CAUSING A SCENE!!!
he was like"Look, i GOT IN THIS PIC.. ill show u this 1 cuz its the only one without a HOSTAGE IN IT!
When i was a BABY, DAWG - A BE HOT!... i'll put these pics in SHADY SHOTS So COMMENT ON IT"
HONESTLY BITCH ..all ur "baby pictures" belongs in the COMEDY "CRIB"!!! LOL
Duke i ain't KNOCKING YA SKIN , But besides China , India got the SMALLEST OF DICKS!!!
The LESSON IS THIS everything u TEXTING IS SHIT But everything i TEXT IS THE SHIT!!!
u got glasses? 'Four-Eyes'! That's good when i take out ya "Pair-a-sight" Without INFECTING YA SHIT
i know in some deep PART OF YOU it's HARD FOR YOU to accept your BARS IS DUE
this TARD'LL LOSE n i know School-is-cool but if cool-was-school i'd out-SMART YOU, DUDE!!!
STRANGE IT IS TRUE .. ur KINDA LAME FOR A BROWN Plus u look like Bombs is ur FAVORITE TUNE
so if osama FLIES A PLANE IN MY HOUSE ... i'mma BLAME IT ON YOU!!!
BITCH PLEASE! ERASE IT i Spit-it-Well u wouldn't "Get-the-belt" like this KID ISN'T BRAISEN!!
Punchlines?? i always "Land mine" but ur always like "GET ME GRENADES, QUICK!!!"
TRUTHS A BITCH for our battle he asked for a NUDEY PIC cuz he couldn't "PICTURE ME NAKED!!!!"
Shiiiit u CHILL WITH THE STRANGEST u said u have a life? only cuz i ain't WILLING TO TAKE IT
you could have a bad hair day .. SIMPLE & BASIC it ain't the VISION YOUR FACE IS
but if i said u "LOOK LIKE SHIT"..You'd THINK IT WAS RACIST!!!!
u ain't hardCORE , LOOK i'll "Burn-this-apetizer" like POOR COOKS!!!
Only time ur "TEXT IS THE BOMB" with LETTERS INVOLVED... was death threats to GEORGE BUSH!!
(No more terrorist jokes...even though he is one)
is his oppiniun STRAIGHT? NO!! don't think i ain't Notice the HATE VOTE!!!
Lemme check ONE TIME *Checks* Fucker Voted on structure lol ... Where was the PUNCHLINES??
i understand flow , And PLUS RHYMES in the FIRST PLACE .. but he also didn't mention WORDPLAY
or personals , complexity , Nameplay ... Shiiit but structure was important right lol ...
And AFTER AWHILE He Started JACKING MY STYLE... *Chills again ... *
Ya'll KNOW HE'S FIBBING he shouldn't have his OWN OPPINIUN
& ur Name & pic alike ... it don't even SHOW HIS IMAGE!!!
The TECHS BEST They'll "STRETCH M" Like HOMER SIMPSON aLONE IN KITCHENS!!!!
u the Type that Don't GET BREAD .. u should pick up Dance music INSTEAD
J WITH AN? cuz he want's to Face me? Fuck noo u'll "FACE MY ASS" , SHITHEAD!!! [?]
I'll PISS IN YA CAR, JEEP ... Keep THINKING U HARD PLEASE
i'll give NO COMPLIMENTS if i "VOTE ANONYMOUS"..it's for POLITICAL PARTIES!!!

"Look, i GOT IN THIS PIC.. i'll show u this cuz it's the only one without a HOSTAGE IN IT" .. LMFAOOO ... Shiiit i impress myself ... stopped trying near the end

Scotty gets my vote. In a battle in text there has to be three main things, flow, rhymes, and structure.
Scott had flow/structure and rhymes, and J Roc only had rhymes.
So Scott for my vote.


Oh pfft ... anything to vote against me right lol .... he coulda won .... but u pick the cat's he won on and leave the rest out .. don't sound too fair duke ... get ya hate voting ass outta my battles lol cuz i ain;t see u voting on those 3 cat's alone anywheree else ..And only had rhymes? Educate yaself

Done ... KILLA SEASONS' BACK!!!! Punchline king .... :staticsmoking:
Last edited by J Roc on Feb 7th, '10, 05:53, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: "Taking out" the trash...diss ... THE ROC!!!

Postby J Roc » Jul 16th, '09, 00:01

lol read the lil paregraph under it ... wasn't a diss to you dukee
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Re: "Taking out" the trash...diss ... THE ROC!!!

Postby James R. » Jul 16th, '09, 00:30

That was long as a mother fucker and it's making my eyes hurt but I seen SHOTS FIRED AT ANONYMOUS! OH SHIT SON!

Did you diss me anywhere in there? Ima read the whole thing later lol.
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Re: "Taking out" the trash...diss ... THE ROC!!!

Postby James R. » Jul 16th, '09, 00:35

Just some nameplay shit. And I think that vote he quoted was anon's vote, but I'm not sure.
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Re: "Taking out" the trash...diss ... THE ROC!!!

Postby James R. » Jul 16th, '09, 00:48

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Re: "Taking out" the trash...diss ... THE ROC!!!

Postby J Roc » Jul 16th, '09, 01:03

Chet Starr wrote:dude you were doing so well with no using caps...what happen?

I could barely read that shit, who got dissed?

Edit: sounds like anon, but he isn't from india, neither is his family :whistle:


lol i just took shot's in the dark at his skin color lol ... i brang up terrorism & all that bullshit lol ... i dunno whut he is

& naww Jame's u didn't get dissed lol ... ur chilll

Kinda went off during some parts of it Cuz , me & this girl was talking dirty in e-mails back & forth hahhah .... Chiiiiiilllll :staticsmoking:
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Re: "Taking out" the trash...diss ... THE ROC!!!

Postby James R. » Jul 16th, '09, 01:07

Lol aight, but still

SHOTS MOTHA FUCKIN FIRED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: "Taking out" the trash...diss ... THE ROC!!!

Postby Solace » Jul 16th, '09, 01:41

Didn't you kind of fail by dissing the wrong ethnicity? :unsure:
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Re: "Taking out" the trash...diss ... THE ROC!!!

Postby classthe_king » Jul 16th, '09, 02:59

I can't read your writing more then 5 lines (not hating) but from what i did read the "you wanted a face off so you got the micheal jackson treatment" was fucking dope
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: "Taking out" the trash...diss ... THE ROC!!!

Postby 4D » Jul 16th, '09, 03:12

Too long man and the upper case is doin my head in. J Roc, you have good rhyme skills, punches and wordplay. But you ruin it with the caps lock button. Seriously man, take the constructive criticism for once, people aren't sayin it for no reason. I used to do that caps lock shit years ago, but realised that it insults a readers intelligence. if your multi's rhyme, they don't need to be capitalised. You've got skills man, but I see your posts getting shot down over this shit, you don't need it.
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