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Postby mcZu » Jun 27th, '09, 23:00

Ya know I cost-much like outer space above ya head
You cheap, just follow the herd like listening to what I said
Fuck what you heard so, I'm beyond doubt like def
I’ll rip you mo' often than people quoting MJ's death
You’re so low, like not in a team, I’m higher up
So, ho, you’re like a grey pair of jeans lighting up
So look, look, I got these four, four four’s fore ‘em
Like posting numerous threads and ignore ‘em
But fuck that gun word play that shit is lame, I see him
I’m down for the cold play, ‘cause my will is champion
Ya know .....my verbal is like ether killing anger
I make you touch down your death like Will Chamber
I'm winning, you chap L's in so I call you a Charlie's Angel
I'll Farah Fawcett you with the lead from my pencil
I define sharpness like a butchers knife stabbed in a thesaurus
I use the ink in sync, my flow doesn't sink, so fuck a chorus
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Re: Random verse

Postby lady speedstik » Jun 28th, '09, 03:25

It's alright, but a bit of it didn't make sense... but maybe that's just me?
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Re: Random verse

Postby mcZu » Jul 8th, '09, 22:21

lady speedstik wrote:It's alright, but a bit of it didn't make sense... but maybe that's just me?


If something didn't make sense, just ask me what and I'll explain.

And thanks for peeping :y:
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Re: Random verse

Postby gutawafang » Jul 9th, '09, 03:22

Hey I really love the namplay man.

And the last night of not needing a chorus was so impact-ful.

I don't understand this:
I'll Farah Fawcett you with the lead from my pencil

And this is the best line you ever made:
I define sharpness like a butchers knife stabbed in a thesaurus
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Re: Random verse

Postby mcZu » Jul 16th, '09, 12:27

gutawafang wrote:I don't understand this:
I'll Farah Fawcett you with the lead from my pencil


I'm winning, you chap L's in so I call you a Charlie's Angel
I'll Farah Fawcett you with the lead from my pencil


It's wordplay building up untill that punchline. ''You chap L's in'' would be ''You Chap-l-in,'' together with ''Charlie Angel'' it would be a reference to Charlie Chaplin. Now, Farah Fawcett played one of Charlie's Angels in Charlie Angels, and she just recently passed away (R.I.P). So ''I'll Farah Fawcett you with the lead from my pencil'' would mean that I'll kill you with my pencil.

Charlie Chaplin's movie where soundless as well, meaning the ''you'' in question can't win (took an L/loss) because he doesn't have a voice to back his shit up.

Hope it's a bit more clear now.

And thanks for checking it out man :y:
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