Made Rappers

[Noeezy]

I'mma just begin the story by simply rhyming in my rap //
Avoiding the glorious assembly line leading to a trap //
Cause most rappers are made, with no lyrics to back them//
Their success starts to fade, impossible to see like a atom//
You wonder where they went, cause they wear out like clothes//
Their career was left for dead and its startin to decompose//
Fighting piece for piece, they try to solve the puzzle//
Keep igniting the beef, but the conflict is the struggle//

part of a song i wrote, if yall like it i'll try to record the full version
let me know what you like/dislike

[Ka0t1c]

good job.

[Drama Setter]

Their success starts to fade, impossible to see like a atom//

sorry sir , But it doesn't make sense I guess

[Noeezy]

Their success starts to fade, impossible to see like a atom//

sorry sir , But it doesn't make sense I guess

Their success starts to fade = Their popularity dramatically decreases
Impossible to see like a atom = You don't see them around anymore. It's not possible to see a single atom with a human eye.

Basically it's about one hit wonders that release a hit and then disappear

[mcZu]

Good job indeed, not overly complex but that aint always needed. I liked it. Record it