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Postby mcZu » Jun 29th, '09, 20:15

You might not catch the flow, kinda complex, however, feed is appreciated.

Yes, man, I’ll be on the know like how you can’t say it, it’s fait
Chess, damn… I check whatever’s on deck like how I flow, mate
Drop them… swords in ya cards, through the opposite spade
Sleight of hand handling the handy lines making you pose a pray
Like say… act like an animal waiting to be attacked by lions
Filled with rhymes and hymns making you believe I aint lying
Like say… standing on both feet like twice the measured sizing
I’ll display like referring to a certain show how you be flying
Like say… mentioning when you be at a certain location trying
Out, like say… cheering and leading while cheating and achieving
Nothing, a decade put in a mandate and then sprayed and played
Like say… the thing you put food on, hungry for bars, waved
Saying ‘feed us’ like an unborn kid, ya weak like a forth of a month
My bars are more concentrated than the author of that ‘Mein kampf’
Fantastic how I be flaming, you fading when I reach for that thing
Drown you in my flow with them sharks until you see that fin
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Re: Wordplay

Postby mcZu » Jul 8th, '09, 21:54

Bump.
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Re: Wordplay

Postby Noeezy » Jul 9th, '09, 23:34

Saying ‘feed us’ like an unborn kid, ya weak like a forth of a month
My bars are more concentrated than the author of that ‘Mein kampf’


haha nice shit man
let me know if you do audio :b:
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Re: Wordplay

Postby mcZu » Jul 16th, '09, 12:18

MusicPimp wrote:
Saying ‘feed us’ like an unborn kid, ya weak like a forth of a month
My bars are more concentrated than the author of that ‘Mein kampf’


haha nice shit man
let me know if you do audio :b:


I'll do, thanks for checking :y:
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Re: Wordplay

Postby Drama Setter » Jul 16th, '09, 12:39

Fantastic how I be flaming, you fading when I reach for that thing
Drown you in my flow with them sharks until you see that fin


your best lines , Thx for sharing bro . :y:
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Re: Wordplay

Postby mcZu » Jul 16th, '09, 12:42

^Thanks bro, appreciate you checking it out :b:
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