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Drake - Best I Ever Had Re-write

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Drake - Best I Ever Had Re-write

Postby JPearson » Jul 17th, '09, 06:58

how ya doing people, re-writ this song with persoanl lyrics 'cause of a mistake i made which lead to a break up with my girlfriend i been with 2 years now n i'm pretty fucked up bout it, but i vent my emotions lyrically n this song is one i'm leaning on to help me. If anyone wants to spit the lyrics acapella or put the songs instrumentals to it i'd appreciate it cause i can't spit for shit...

Emma you mean everything, you’re all I’ve ever wanted
We could last forever yer, I just hope that you still want it
I swear I’ll do anything, I promise I’m being honest
I want this forever I swear I will spend what ever on it

I wanna hold you now, that’s all I can think about
I see you everywhere I turn can’t find a way around
Wanna be with ya, but I’m filled up with doubt
When asked what you’re like I say the same thing every time

I say you the Fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the best I’ll Eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
I said you the fuckin . .

I know I’ve got a long wait, love you so I just don’t care
Call me when you’re ready hope you know that I’ll be waiting there
I’ll be waiting there
Emma I’ll be waiting there
Sitting thinking of you ‘cause I see and hear you everywhere
Ha, and you won’t even have to ask me
Won’t let an opportunity to see you get right past me
If you ever doubt I love you don’t I love more than last week
Thinking of your kiss jump starts my heart from slow to fast beats
Pjs, hair messed, chilling with no make up on
That’s when you’re the prettiest I hope that you don’t take that wrong
Never wanna leave you where I go I would take you along
Hold you’re hand and when we’re chilling hug you and I’d play our song
So I’ll be patient like a waiting room
Got three words to say to you I hope I get to say them soon
And I’ll do anything to prove it
You’ll never lose my love or even move it ‘cause…

Emma you mean everything, you’re all I’ve ever wanted
We could last forever yer, I just hope that you still want it
I swear I’ll do anything, I promise I’m being honest
I want this forever I swear I will spend what ever on it

I wanna hold you now, that’s all I can think about
I see you everywhere I turn can’t find a way around
Wanna be with ya, but I’m filled up with doubt
When asked what you’re like I say the same thing every time

I say you the Fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the best I’ll Eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
I said you the fuckin . .

Sex, love, pain Emma we would be so perfect
Love so strong all the rough times would be worth it
Know that we would work out every time I see our picture
You’d figure we’d work out too if you just knew how much I missed you
All I want’s to be yours, to hug you and to kiss you
Protect you from hurt and pain like you’re my baby sister
But there is a couple things that I’d like to do with you
Couldn’t be my sister though now feel like I should whisper

So if you ever want to see me
Just text or call me and I’ll be free
I’m still in love, loving you ain’t easy
No matter what happens I’ll still love you please believe me

Just know my mind is fucking wrecked now
Sorry for all the pain I caused and all the fucking let downs
If I see a guy trying it I’ll twist his fucking neck round
Spill his blood and leave the fucker lifeless on the wet ground

Emma you mean everything, you’re all I’ve ever wanted
We could last forever yer, I just hope that you still want it
I swear I’ll do anything, I promise I’m being honest
I want this forever I swear I will spend what ever on it

I wanna hold you now, that’s all I can think about
I see you everywhere I turn can’t find a way around
Wanna be with ya, but I’m filled up with doubt
When asked what you’re like I say the same thing every time

I say you the Fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the best I’ll Eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
I said you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the best I’ll Eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have

like i said if you wanna make the track feel free, proper personal to me even though it's a bit girly... anyway let me know what ya think n if ya make the track
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Re: Drake - Best I Ever Had Re-write

Postby JPearson » Jul 17th, '09, 07:11

lol cheers man this track means alot, i know its a bit girly writing love songs but love is a bitch man lol

cheers if you do spit it to, n no matter what you do it's gunna sound better than me so odnt worry lol you write lyrics?
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Re: Drake - Best I Ever Had Re-write

Postby JPearson » Jul 17th, '09, 07:17

just realised it seems shit if you don't know a bit of background to it... been with this girl emma for two years and spent literally every night sleeping at hers, was like a fucking marriage but a good one... i left her about a year ago 'cause all we did was argue n i started seeing some other girl, only did it to take my mind off emma and cause this girl was stunnin, but i got back with emma n she found out about the girl i was seeing.. .that passed but then recently we've been just arguing again and ended up being apart again, so to help take my mind off it i met up with this girl a few times and emma found out again which i shouldve seen coming really, so now i'm basically waiting and hoping i get back with emma and all i do is think about her, everything reminds me and im sorry im sounding like a bitch n like a every romantic film thats ever been made but thats how it is
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Re: Drake - Best I Ever Had Re-write

Postby J Roc » Jul 18th, '09, 05:04

JPearson wrote:just realised it seems shit if you don't know a bit of background to it... been with this girl emma for two years and spent literally every night sleeping at hers, was like a fucking marriage but a good one... i left her about a year ago 'cause all we did was argue n i started seeing some other girl, only did it to take my mind off emma and cause this girl was stunnin, but i got back with emma n she found out about the girl i was seeing.. .that passed but then recently we've been just arguing again and ended up being apart again, so to help take my mind off it i met up with this girl a few times and emma found out again which i shouldve seen coming really, so now i'm basically waiting and hoping i get back with emma and all i do is think about her, everything reminds me and im sorry im sounding like a bitch n like a every romantic film thats ever been made but thats how it is


Wordd dude me & this girl got pretty much the same thing going on lol ..... cept we dated like , 6 month's ... and we broke up for 2 month's ... and she found out i was seeing 2 girl's within that time lol we got back together about a month ago , and after a few hour's ago idk what's gonna happen .

But the lyric's was sick lol .... Kinda got a rock vibe to it , Not Hard rock but you know lol ... Felt it , Propsss
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Re: Drake - Best I Ever Had Re-write

Postby JPearson » Jul 18th, '09, 05:14

yer loves a bitch aint it, still wont let it go though...

yer this songs just a re-write, syllable for syllable basically, you not heard drakes original tune?

if u got spare time man check out this one to, just 3 drafts of verse for a song, no chorus and hard to tell how it flows but it flows fluent trust me, got a ouple different flow ideas in there too so check it out n tell me what you think

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