Someone please!

[JPearson]

i know there's some sick spitters in here n i definatley aint one of em so could someone lay these lyrics down n send me the audio?

Emma you mean everything, you’re all I’ve ever wanted
We could last forever yer, I just hope that you still want it
I swear I’ll do anything, I promise I’m being honest
I want this forever I swear I will spend what ever on it

I wanna hold you now, that’s all I can think about
I see you everywhere I turn can’t find a way around
Wanna be with ya, but I’m filled up with doubt
When asked what you’re like I say the same thing every time

I say you the Fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the best I’ll Eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
I said you the fuckin . .

I know I’ve got a long wait, love you so I just don’t care
Call me when you’re ready hope you know that I’ll be waiting there
I’ll be waiting there
Emma I’ll be waiting there
Sitting thinking of you ‘cause I see and hear you everywhere
Ha, and you won’t even have to ask me
Won’t let an opportunity to see you get right past me
If you ever doubt I love you don’t I love more than last week
Thinking of your kiss jump starts my heart from slow to fast beats
Pjs, hair messed, chilling with no make up on
That’s when you’re the prettiest I hope that you don’t take that wrong
Never wanna leave you where I go I would take you along
Hold you’re hand and when we’re chilling hug you and I’d play our song
So I’ll be patient like a waiting room
Got three words to say to you I hope I get to say them soon
And I’ll do anything to prove it
You’ll never lose my love or even move it ‘cause…

Emma you mean everything, you’re all I’ve ever wanted
We could last forever yer, I just hope that you still want it
I swear I’ll do anything, I promise I’m being honest
I want this forever I swear I will spend what ever on it

I wanna hold you now, that’s all I can think about
I see you everywhere I turn can’t find a way around
Wanna be with ya, but I’m filled up with doubt
When asked what you’re like I say the same thing every time

I say you the Fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the best I’ll Eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
I said you the fuckin . .

Sex, love, pain Emma we would be so perfect
Love so strong all the rough times would be worth it
Know that we would work out every time I see our picture
You’d figure we’d work out too if you just knew how much I missed you
All I want’s to be yours, to hug you and to kiss you
Protect you from hurt and pain like you’re my baby sister
But there is a couple things that I’d like to do with you
Couldn’t be my sister though now feel like I should whisper

So if you ever want to see me
Just text or call me and I’ll be free
I’m still in love, loving you ain’t easy
No matter what happens I’ll still love you please believe me

Just know my mind is fucking wrecked now
Sorry for all the pain I caused and all the fucking let downs
If I see a guy trying it I’ll twist his fucking neck round
Spill his blood and leave the fucker lifeless on the wet ground

Emma you mean everything, you’re all I’ve ever wanted
We could last forever yer, I just hope that you still want it
I swear I’ll do anything, I promise I’m being honest
I want this forever I swear I will spend what ever on it

I wanna hold you now, that’s all I can think about
I see you everywhere I turn can’t find a way around
Wanna be with ya, but I’m filled up with doubt
When asked what you’re like I say the same thing every time

I say you the Fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the best I’ll Eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
I said you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the fuckin best
you the best I’ll Eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have
best I’ll eva have

[JPearson]

o sorry

[Fa-Q]

hey if your just startin out this is GOOD...but Im not feeling the chorus....kinda Drake-esque...so I would change that also, unless this is a potential single for a album, then I wouldnt have a repetitive chorus ya know. Especially if the song is aimed for meaning ie directed or written for a girl ya know....

[JPearson]

yeah i see what you're saying but the line 'best i'll ever have' has a an inside meaning that only really me and her would get, 'cause like i say it's a personal song and it also fits in perfectly with the syllables in the original... but i definately see where you're coming from and it's still in it's draft stages but i think i'll be keeping the chorus as close as possible to the one from the actualy song... what dya think about the verse lyrics then?

[Fa-Q]

yeah i see what you're saying but the line 'best i'll ever have' has a an inside meaning that only really me and her would get, 'cause like i say it's a personal song and it also fits in perfectly with the syllables in the original... but i definately see where you're coming from and it's still in it's draft stages but i think i'll be keeping the chorus as close as possible to the one from the actualy song... what dya think about the verse lyrics then?

well when its written about or for a girl it doesnt need multis cause they usually dont know or look for that...but good meaning and

Ha, and you won’t even have to ask me
Won’t let an opportunity to see you get right past me
If you ever doubt I love you don’t I love more than last week
Thinking of your kiss jump starts my heart from slow to fast beats
Pjs, hair messed, chilling with no make up on
That’s when you’re the prettiest I hope that you don’t take that wrong
Never wanna leave you where I go I would take you along
Hold you’re hand and when we’re chilling hug you and I’d play our song

was the best line...cause the first 4 lines were dope then you took lines from "best I ever had" and twisted em to relate, im assuming, for her...dope

[JPearson]

yer i did, some of the lyrics will seem like they're just to rhyme but it's lyrics only me and her would understand fully sort of thing

cheers for the feedback though i appreciate man, 'ima check you stuff to