a little quick, but i felt like writing

[Ka0t1c]

i appear here tonight prepared to fight
as i endur the nearing fright
but to fear from it's sight i bare
that's right cuz after years on this ride
i'm aware that my flight
in the air might be quite plight for my peers
but i've been tightening my gears
if only the bearings inside
can help steer me to guide
towards the light so it's clear
where my soul and mind
can always share
and soar us to heights
beyond with our ideas
to unite and declare
a life outside the premeire
of a striving nightmare
which i'm trying to survive
not hide from
now the signs are impair-
ing the eyes
still i am not crying these tears
i will rise up and spare the wise
yes, i swear
and those who deny shall lose theirs
they'll die by lightening, beware

[gutawafang]

Poetic shits again. I feel it man. It's like you're trying to express soemthing within you.

[Ka0t1c]

thanks, and my cpu died, now im on my ps3,damn

[Drama Setter]

not too good bro , You should work on your length of you bar more and the flow too , I think you were bored and numb while you were writing this .

[Ka0t1c]

the bars are like that so the rhyme pattern is more recognisable otherwise ppl not familiar with the style might get thrown off... and yes i was bored but i put in great effort in a small amount of time so this piece surprised me.