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'5 Star Generals' Is A Big Deal

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'5 Star Generals' Is A Big Deal

Postby mcZu » Jul 8th, '09, 22:04

I am the best player in ’09 so far like Lebron yo
So don’t flip ME upside down like Nintendo
I end your shit yo with a red dot on you like record
Spell your death with my pen like a Ouija board
See my pen is force, Zu, behind his bars like a beast
Immense hunger so the game for me is a feast
So please take a step back before I dismantle ya
If your chick is sweet, I’ll hit her like a piñata
I don’t tuck something in like some kids in pajamas
I’m so down to earth they even try to real estate me
So real that you all look like anime compared to me
I’ll Sasha Cohen your face like he did with Shady
So eat some shit you bum, or should I call you sodomy
Nobody could stay unburned standing beside me
I’m the dead-end for the bandwagon your all on
So stop talking shady like you got light on your tongue
Like the flag of Lebanon they talk about pushing white
Smoking trees and wearing red when they write
They are way too afraid to charge you head on
Like a check uncashed fucked up like a strap on
You haters made me turn to being fly like starscream
I use the ink extreme, ya’ll think your hot like some steam
While in fact they all fogy and shit when they speak
I stay up like a facelift, ‘cause I blaze sick with insane shit
When I rhyme I don’t front about some fake shit
Ya’ll better be back on some basics ‘cause you aint shit
Like potty training, stop talking about shotties aiming
Your lame, soft and stay down like erectile dysfunctions
I don’t like to do this, but you made me chose this function
This function is a diss-function generalizing in general
All of my genes fire up like Jean Grey’s minerals
Next time think twice before you attack a 5 Star General
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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Re: '5 Star Generals' Is A Big Deal

Postby Spyder » Jul 8th, '09, 22:21

damn son love the wordplay in there, 5 Star represent :D
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Re: '5 Star Generals' Is A Big Deal

Postby mcZu » Jul 16th, '09, 12:38

^Ya know how the Generals do what they do.

Thanks for checking it out man.
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Re: '5 Star Generals' Is A Big Deal

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 16th, '09, 14:02

yea good shit...all the generals always put good shit out....wasnt diggin the shady line...but everything else was dope
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Re: '5 Star Generals' Is A Big Deal

Postby mcZu » Jul 21st, '09, 16:41

Thanks for checking man, and about the Shady line..well, it's just a punch lol.
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