New Verse (About Love Obviously)

[James R.]

Aww Scotty. You're always on some heartbroken shit lol. I liked it though. The rhyming was good. It flowed really well. It was an emotional verse and I can get with that. Good job homie. Keep it comin.

[gutawafang]

Good flow and it rhymes well. It's a good love verse.

[JPearson]

*for my opinion please see above comment for details*

misleaded isnt a word though, i got confused on that 'cause of tinchy stryders song but its just mislead, but the ryhming, flow n all that was well good plus i can relate to love shit atm

[JPearson]

lol if tinchy stryder can ryhme skeen n brraaapp u can ryhme misleading

[mcZu]

I liked it. Emotion packed verse, flow was on-spot, vocab was good enough, rhyming was good and the vibe I got from it was what I should have gotten from a verse like this. The structure could have maybe been a bit more 'read-able,' if you know what I'm saying, but then again, I'm jut looking for something to give you contstructive feed on. And maybe you could have thrown in a chorus after that switch up, when you went from confession to hoping. And maybe try to make each single verse a bit longer (if you throw in a chorus that is), a hook can be nice and you could try some abstract rhyming.

But it is fine as it is, I liked it, so good job Scotty