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Stylin' on you

Postby J Roc » Jul 21st, '09, 20:54

It's a Blessing in Disguise in "Dis Guy's Lip" Like a Fake Mustache
These Clown's is about as sad as anonymous leaving for a week - then trying to Make Comebacks
LOL .. Okay Come Blast...You Left the 'Tommy' in the 'Crib' That's why you Hate Rugrat's
I'll OD On Wisdom - Make My Brain Collapse
Cuz Woman is Searching for men that Listens to Bitches
That's Also All So Smooth , Plus Fit as a Chimp Is
Just Realize With Real Eyes That i Fit the Discription
And my Dick Make her 'Jaws' So Big They Could Swim With the Fishes
Then we'll Tongue 'Wrestle' Just to make sure this Chick isn't 'Chicken'
So i don't have to Serve her with Dip & Some Buscuits
Hit the Fishing Spots With Fishing Rods - But it's to Tiny For Fisher's
you Sad We Can't Fish? Then You can 'Cry my a River'....LOL
& ya'll don't wanna go to war...just look Look at ya man's
Cuz My-Reader's Are Like-Beaver's.. Way they 'Put up a Damn!!!!'

i dumbed my flow down since i stopped using caplocks lol ... Diggy? .... What ya'll perfer this style or my old one?

EDIT:: Shiiit ... Almost Forgot... Lightwork/
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Re: Stylin' on you

Postby JPearson » Jul 21st, '09, 20:58

J roc wrote:It's a Blessing in Disguise in "Dis Guy's Lip" Like a Fake Mustache
These Clown's is about as sad as anonymous leaving for a week - then trying to Make Comebacks
LOL .. Okay Come Blast...You Left the 'Tommy' in the 'Crib' That's why you Hate Rugrat's
I'll OD On Wisdom - Make My Brain Collapse
Cuz Woman is Searching for men that Listens to Bitches
That's Also All So Smooth , Plus Fit as a Chimp Is
Just Realize With Real Eyes That i Fit the Discription
And my Dick Make her 'Jaws' So Big They Could Swim With the Fishes
Then we'll Tongue 'Wrestle' Just to make sure this Chick isn't 'Chicken'
So i don't have to Serve her with Dip & Some Buscuits
Hit the Fishing Spots With Fishing Rods - But it's to Tiny For Fisher's
you Sad We Can't Fish? Then You can 'Cry my a River'....LOL
& ya'll don't wanna go to war...just look Look at ya man's
Cuz My-Reader's Are Like-Beaver's.. Way they 'Put up a Damn!!!!'

i dumbed my flow down since i stopped using caplocks lol ... Diggy? .... What ya'll perfer this style or my old one?

EDIT:: Shiiit ... Almost Forgot... Lightwork/


lol loved the end word play, thought the flow was sick... simple flows can be well effective good work man :y:
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oh... like finding a haystack in a coal mine
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Re: Stylin' on you

Postby James R. » Jul 21st, '09, 21:00

ROFL @ the Edit

It was cool, but it was definite light work compared to your other shit. I prefer the other style with no caps lock. If you REALLY have to make the multies stand out then bold them or something maybe that won't look as annoying and won't make it so hard to read.

Check my new shit son
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Re: Stylin' on you

Postby J Roc » Jul 21st, '09, 21:16

SLMacDougall wrote:lol the edit was funny, but when r we gonna see some 'heavy work' ... ? it all seems to be light.
would love to see what ur like in real life lol

It's a Blessing in Disguise in "Dis Guy's Lip" Like a Fake Mustache
These Clown's is about as sad as anonymous leaving for a week - then trying to Make Comebacks


:laughing:

btw i find it hilarious when you talk in the middle of ur raps lol, like saying, lol, or whatever, it's well funny.


i mostly save my Nicest punchline's on battle rap site's lol .... i'm in a Tourney right now i'm KO'n the dude in my current round lol ... after i get eliminated i'll post some hard shit on here .. just for you :D

Thank's for reading & feeding guy'ss , - & I Peeped it James
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