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Right For Me

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Right For Me

Postby JPearson » Jul 22nd, '09, 18:22

Swear I ain’t ever met a girl who made me the feel the way that you do
Knew to make sure from the start to take this chance and never lose you
Move to you and keep you close and now I hate to see you leave
So please believe that I’m in love with you, wear my heart on my sleeve
To hear you breathe… Is like a favourite song
Your eyes are like a favourite film I could watch ‘em all night long
You words to me are like complete sense ‘cause to me you say no wrong
Your hugs and kisses can’t compare just know that they make me grow strong
Never be gone, just stay with me, I’ll make sure you get what you need
I’ll never let you down or hurt you, make sure that you never bleed
Help you through with all your goals in life, make sure that you succeed
And listen to you when you talk to me all this is guaranteed
It’s like you freed… me out a life that ain’t worth living
Made me stronger and also weaker ‘cause I know I’ll always give in
To your love… but that’s the way I want my life to be
It’s me and you and you and me’s the way my life is right for me

lemme know what u think :y:
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Re: Right For Me

Postby Drama Setter » Jul 22nd, '09, 19:26

yeahhhhhhhh , I like it bro . very good :8)
your best line
Your eyes are like a favourite film I could watch ‘em all night long :y:
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Re: Right For Me

Postby JPearson » Jul 22nd, '09, 19:30

cheers man, was gunna make up a load of lines like that but thought thats to far, appreciate the feed :y:
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