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Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby James R. » Jul 21st, '09, 17:56

Who wanna test and get left no chest
Heart broken sternums open all slumped on the desk
Yeah to the death I always rep for the generals
You can step to the sentinels and get wrecked to the mineral
Please accept I’m the sicker dude, best in your visual
Got notches on my belt just to the left of my genitals
My words and my balls is all that I need
My record says enough dawg you ain’t harder than me
I rep the generals but I’m the king obviously
I might have started out behind but you started deceased
It’s not a question when I step to you section
I sense and detect that you soft like a messed up erection
I’m untouchable I’m spittin at you just to fuck wit you
The evidence is evident man it’s right in front of you
Not another dude gonna raise a buzz like I could
Not another dude gonna say the stuff that I would
I’m just waiting for a bitch to get brave and attack
Spit some whack bull shit to try to make me react
The real spitters respect the fake rappers wanna beef
Cuz they know that’s the only way we ever gonna speak
We could never see eye to eye cuz the shit I set aside
Is better than what you would try to get televised
And I never lied man I’ll be the best rap head alive
I’ll take the mainstream and underground rebel guys
But til the smoke settles I keep shootin them blind shots
Feed you my food for thought right until your mind pops
They try to question my rep but I remind myself
I designed my blueprint with no outsider’s help
And I’m still illmatic that’s why my lines are felt
Don’t sweat the technique until your find yourself
And that’s from now til forever I’ll be the dopest alive
Man all you gotta do to see it is just open your eyes...
Last edited by James R. on Jul 21st, '09, 18:10, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby JPearson » Jul 21st, '09, 18:03

James R. wrote:Who wanna test and get left no chest
Heart broken sternums open all slumped on the desk
Yeah to the death I always rep for the generals
You can step to the sentinels and get wrecked to the mineral
Please accept I’m the sicker dude, best in your visual
Got notches on my belt just to the left of my genitals

My words and my balls is all that I need
My record says enough dawg you ain’t harder than me
I rep the generals but I’m the king obviously
I might have started out behind but you started deceased
It’s not a question when I step to you section
I sense and detect that you soft like a messed up erection
I’m untouchable I’m spittin at you just to fuck wit you
The evidence is evident man it’s right in front of you

Not another dude gonna raise a buzz like I could
Not another dude gonna say the stuff that I could
I’m just waiting for a bitch to get brave and attack
Spit some whack bull shit to try to make me react
The real spitters respect the fake rappers wanna beef
Cuz they know that’s the only way we ever gonna speak
We could never see eye to eye cuz the shit I set aside
Is better than what you would try to get televised
And I never lied man I’ll be the best rap head alive
I’ll take the mainstream and underground rebel guys
But til the smoke settles I keep shootin them blind shots
Feed you my food for thought right until your mind pops

They try to question my rep but I remind myself
I designed my blueprint with no outsider’s help
And I’m still illmatic that’s why my lines are felt
Don’t sweat the technique until your find yourself
And that’s from now til forever I’ll be the dopest alive
Man all you gotta do to see it is just open your eyes...


sick verse, i highlighted my favourite bits, like em either coz they were clever or flowed perfectly... i highlighted 'could' 'cause i reckon it should be 'would' but apart from that it's fucking sick :y:
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oh... like finding a haystack in a coal mine
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Re: Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby James R. » Jul 21st, '09, 18:10

^Haha you're right that should have been would. Thanks for pointing that out. And thanks for checkin JP. I appreciate it.
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Re: Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby mcZu » Jul 21st, '09, 18:19

Shit's dope, flowed fucking smooth and lyrical it's dope.

I like it.

You know how them Generals do :smoking:
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Re: Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby James R. » Jul 21st, '09, 18:20

Had to let 'em know the generals still doin it and doin it well.
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Re: Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby James R. » Jul 21st, '09, 18:24

Well Maybe seeing as how you know my plans the "type of shit that moves people up in the game" is EXACTLY the type of shit I need haha. Thanks for checkin bro.

@ Scott- Every time I go 3 or 4 drops without a love track you start requesting lmao. I'll see if I can dig smtn up for you later today. I feel like it might be a double or triple drop kinda day if I got the time.
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Re: Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 21st, '09, 19:01

some dope shit right thuurrrr :y: :y:
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Re: Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby James R. » Jul 21st, '09, 19:02

Thanks C-Rizzle
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Re: Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby J Roc » Jul 21st, '09, 21:13

James R. wrote:Who wanna test and get left no chest
Heart broken sternums open all slumped on the desk
Yeah to the death I always rep for the generals
You can step to the sentinels and get wrecked to the mineral
Please accept I’m the sicker dude, best in your visual
Got notches on my belt just to the left of my genitals
My words and my balls is all that I need
My record says enough dawg you ain’t harder than me
I rep the generals but I’m the king obviously
I might have started out behind but you started deceased
It’s not a question when I step to you section
I sense and detect that you soft like a messed up erection
I’m untouchable I’m spittin at you just to fuck wit you
The evidence is evident man it’s right in front of you
Not another dude gonna raise a buzz like I could
Not another dude gonna say the stuff that I would
I’m just waiting for a bitch to get brave and attack
Spit some whack bull shit to try to make me react
The real spitters respect the fake rappers wanna beef
Cuz they know that’s the only way we ever gonna speak
We could never see eye to eye cuz the shit I set aside
Is better than what you would try to get televised
And I never lied man I’ll be the best rap head alive
I’ll take the mainstream and underground rebel guys
But til the smoke settles I keep shootin them blind shots
Feed you my food for thought right until your mind pops
They try to question my rep but I remind myself
I designed my blueprint with no outsider’s help
And I’m still illmatic that’s why my lines are felt
Don’t sweat the technique until your find yourself
And that’s from now til forever I’ll be the dopest alive
Man all you gotta do to see it is just open your eyes...


lol Jame's you gotta be one of the most consistant dude's on here .... Nothing week about it :8)
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Re: Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby James R. » Jul 21st, '09, 21:13

Haha thanks Roc. I can't let you come in here tryna take over on that punchline king shit nahmean? :smoking:
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Re: Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby Spyder » Jul 21st, '09, 23:28

dope shit man, loved the flow of it and the rhyme scheme.
9/10 for me man Generals represent :D
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Re: Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby gutawafang » Jul 22nd, '09, 03:44

It's like so DOPE! :happy:

Flow is perfect. Rhymes and concept spot on. :y:

I don't know what else to say. :worship:
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Re: Allow Me to Reintroduce Myself

Postby James R. » Jul 23rd, '09, 01:03

Thanks for the feed homies.

Buuuuuuuuuuuump
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