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Fa-Q - Darkness

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Fa-Q - Darkness

Postby Fa-Q » May 21st, '09, 02:28

The Darkness will soon
Consume your carcass
The hall ways bleed blood
And soon your dead body will feed the mud
And your one way ticket to hell
Has no return address so lick it well

For Katie its bed time
But really its red rum, whoops I mean red wine
She sees the chair where the ax handles sit
Behind it the glair of the wax candles lit
She grabs the sheet to pull it as she’s fenced in fear
She feels the heat of the bullet against her ear
Why you worrying about that chest pain
It’s a heart attack worry about your pressed brain
Against your skull
Just your luck you’re dense and dull
You’re a waste of flesh
Your faces a pest
All I wanted was a taste of your breast
What’s that tickle the binding your hands and your feet are next
Your pussyll be soakin after repeated sex
Your lucky I beheaded my last victim then slept like a baby
Insanity set in then crept in crazy
I’ll tie you where you belong a stripper pole
Ill push your raped body in the bloody reciprocal
Until the saw stops and the wood chippers full
---------------------------Chorus

It’ll be a quick death Ill slice your throat
Sing hymns acapella whether or not it’s the right note
What’s that your requesting amazing grace
A timeless classic ‘cept Dres raisin’ the bass
Don’t ask crazy what crazy knows
But I can tell you about your neck and how many ways it goes
AHH bitch now you got a crooked spine
It would be straight just look at mine
You better learn to stay calm
For your body’s is burned with napalm
Wait why do you have bleeding palms
They say slow breathing calms
Not sitting in a corner reading psalms
I might let you go better turn that charm on
How long did it take you to learn your arms gone
Ha if heights was your worst fear
Soon it will change to this car stuck in first gear
Hmm what sinks better this or that thinner rock
Aw f*ck it Ill just buy some chains and a cinderblock
--------------------------Chorus

Your limp lifeless body wrapped in trash bags
I can only tell your dead if your eye lashes sags
Oh so I’m a killer right
If killer is miller then I’m just miller lite
Killing just another thing to raise my heart rate
Evil person but just part hate
I guess the final piece of art’s Kate
Should I marry Kate or smoke the ashes of lee
Ill cloak the car as it crashes into the sea
I guess I’m ashamed I hurt her
But soon the cops’ll come and Ill be blamed for murder
It’s almost eleven to twelve
Now quickly decide heaven or hell
See the problem is hell has the worst stench
You’ll beg for just a drop of water to have your thirst quench
See some people see me as a rose with thorns
When really I’m a devil with super imposed horns
-------------Chorus
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Re: Fa-Q - Darkness

Postby Ka0t1c » May 21st, '09, 02:35

good shit dude, i enjoyed how creative this is and it flows pretty good, i would love to hear audio of this! :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Fa-Q - Darkness

Postby gutawafang » May 21st, '09, 10:09

Multis were used so fucking wisely and cool-ly. LOL. The flow's perfect for a song. I believe you should make more of this shits. :y:
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Re: Fa-Q - Darkness

Postby JPearson » Jul 19th, '09, 23:59

Definatley still seing an Em pattern in you stuff, dya record any of it?
It will be like finding a nail in a coal mine
haystack
oh... like finding a haystack in a coal mine
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Re: Fa-Q - Darkness

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 23rd, '09, 04:16

Yeah I think you should definitly make more songs like that I think you kill every song I've seen you do like that
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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