Love and Loss

[MC Anonymous]

With love theres loss and with loss there's pain
in the rain you really see people insane
I've tried my hand with love, it got stucked
I got fucked, in my heart the shots bucked
so what is it, What is this love you speak?
I run into hearts but above is weak
every time I connect disconnection takes place
this girl I loved went away and made haste
I came with a flame, but she through it away
I wrote and I spoke, got skewered with pain
I loved her, I really did, but she is gone
what the fuck am I going to do, come in with bombs
force these people to accept me and love me back
release in these streets some bugged out tacks?
I'm gone in denile, that my life will stay
in the middle of strife and the knife will play

Love is painful, such a fury in ways
cause you never even know when the rubies will play
or when they come to your way, will you go and deny?
In suicide note, I say atleast he tried
But don't tell me that true love exists
she said the same thing, now my heart is ripped
I start to kiss, we exchanged our breath
now I wouldn't even want to exchange the meth
I'll chain her chest, and those painful breasts
will be locked away from the playful rest
You' will never see me, or hear me on CD
talkin' bout this shit if it didn't affect me
I love and loss, and now the loss is glossed
with the pain in my brain, and I wanna toss
Her off the bridge, she could go and kiss
bedrocks rocks with her lips and her tits

[gutawafang]

I've read all on MSN except this:
I'm gone in denile, that my life will stay
in the middle of strife and the knife will play

It's pretty direct and it sounds desperate. But it sounds like a successful confession. Quite good multis and concept. Direct to the title.

[MC Anonymous]

Thanks Fish.

[MC Anonymous]

lol at the very last line .. "tits" .. very emotional ..

nice piece, i always prefer you doing stuff like this, rather than your really complex rhyme filled songs.

Supposed to show anger lol
Thanks for the feed

[Solace]

I really liked that...I agree with Scott I like this style the best from you. I enjoyed the first verse and the first half of the 2nd verse the best, just didnt like the last lines. Keep at it