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MC Anonymous Diss (biting his style)

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Re: MC Anonymous Diss (biting his style)

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 23rd, '09, 02:19

This shit to wack, aint even gonna bother to respond, at least your other two were worthy.
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Re: MC Anonymous Diss (biting his style)

Postby Brandon S » Jul 23rd, '09, 02:33

SLMacDougall wrote:and ur a dick, got no respect for u nemore


And you just embarrased yourself. That was terrible, such basic shit. Anonymous at least says complex shit and shows great vocabulary
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Re: MC Anonymous Diss (biting his style)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 23rd, '09, 02:42

The dashes distracted me a lot. The flow is off the whole time, making it sound like an acapella. But I think the multis are quite good.
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Re: MC Anonymous Diss (biting his style)

Postby Requiem » Jul 23rd, '09, 03:06

multis were good, but as everyone said before me. basic stuff
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Re: MC Anonymous Diss (biting his style)

Postby theJFKshow » Jul 23rd, '09, 18:29

SLMacDougall wrote:
Brandon S wrote:
SLMacDougall wrote:and ur a dick, got no respect for u nemore


And you just embarrased yourself. That was terrible, such basic shit. Anonymous at least says complex shit and shows great vocabulary


you can't embarrass yourself on a forum tbh

Some how you manage to do it.
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Re: MC Anonymous Diss (biting his style)

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 23rd, '09, 18:36

theJFKshow wrote:
SLMacDougall wrote:
Brandon S wrote:And you just embarrased yourself. That was terrible, such basic shit. Anonymous at least says complex shit and shows great vocabulary


you can't embarrass yourself on a forum tbh

Some how you manage to do it.

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Re: MC Anonymous Diss (biting his style)

Postby Brandon S » Jul 24th, '09, 06:46

SLMacDougall wrote:i don't feel embarrassed though, so no, i don't 'manage to do it' idiot.


Ok, well you should be. And yeah, you do
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Re: MC Anonymous Diss (biting his style)

Postby Le Tunisien » Jul 24th, '09, 19:00

this was ok :y:

and oh yeah fuk the complex,hard vocab of Annonymous,i wont open a dictionarry to rhyme lol
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