Mad Mad World

[JPearson]

for a topic like this, as i said before, ryhmes n flows dont really come into it, its the feelings n this is obviously filled with deep feelings u have, perfect for what it is

[JPearson]

lol its cool man, do what u do for real tho this verse was all it shoulda been

[Drama Setter]

good job bro , It's very dope, thx chet

your best damn line

drown me in my drink, please god just let me sink
I just sit here and think, life got me at the brinkett

[gutawafang]

Hey man, that was pretty good flow. I liked the story and concept of it. It rhymes well but the multis can be better. First two lines was dope man.

This too:
if that's what god had to do, then where's my story arc
got cast with a sorry part, my art slowly eats my heart

I just felt those lines.

[James R.]

I like it actually. Like you said, it's not Anonymous style with all the rhyming and multies, but I enjoyed the rhyming. I liked the flow, I liked the message/concept, it was all good stuff man. Good job. You should drop more often.

[Solace]

I enjoyed it a lot even if it wasn't complex because you don't structure like a retard for one, and the emotion was there and only thing it lacked was multies...Which while reading I didn't even realize. Good piece.

[D'Leh]

man i try my best to came up with some like this but its hard
....good one chet!!!!!

[Ice_Scarred]

Wow, I enjoyed this. It had a simple yet interesting rhyming pattern. It actually seems like your talking about stuff on this too. Like real relatable stuff, imo. Thats one of the greatest things I like to find in people's verses.

I recently dropped something quick (just ok) yesterday, called LazyTown.
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I don't wanna sound like i'm begging for attention though.