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Good Bye; I'll Miss You

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Good Bye; I'll Miss You

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 28th, '09, 02:31

appauling hieghts, I'm falling sight
lost in the dark and I'm calling light
need you in my life, I love you girl
I can take you above the world
this thing called passion, I'm sure you know
it leaks outside from this verse and flow
everybody knows that I want you too
I talk about you, it's so haunting to
you're in my thoughts, your in my dreams
I see you, I get fired streams
Don't you see we were meant to be?
without you I'm on bended knee
Looking at the skies I'm asking why
''don't do this to me, I want to die
She's so gorgeous, and she's like me
writes poetry, and she shows it free
well atleast to me, the perfect match
God said, these feelings, your verses match
I said Ok, I know now what to do
releasing, I have these cuts so soon
now that your moving I don't know
what to do or what to even show
When I heard, I was pissed
yet I put aside my selfish wish
and tried my best to really help you
cause that's what these real lovers do
every hint I dropped, you knew or didn't
love poem was for you, yeah I said it
You're gone, have no reason to keep
these fucking feelings in my sleep
I can't let my eyes reside and weep
before my future becomes so weak
Last edited by MC Anonymous on Jul 28th, '09, 02:48, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Good Bye; I'll Miss You

Postby gutawafang » Jul 28th, '09, 02:35

That piece made me cry man. I LOVED it.
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Re: Good Bye; I'll Miss You

Postby JPearson » Jul 28th, '09, 02:36

u know im the love shit... liked it man
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Re: Good Bye; I'll Miss You

Postby Emadyville » Jul 28th, '09, 02:45

I thoroughly enjoyed that, didn't like the ending for some reason but that was dope nonetheless :y: :y:
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