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Re: haunted house

Postby ritchieA » Jul 27th, '09, 22:31

yh its gd i liked it keep goin :D
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Re: haunted house

Postby Almostlity » Jul 27th, '09, 22:36

Creepy :tounge2: liked it, good storytelling :smoking:
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Re: haunted house

Postby JPearson » Jul 27th, '09, 23:48

i liked it... good story.... i liked the 1st two lines the best
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Re: haunted house

Postby gutawafang » Jul 28th, '09, 03:00

can't flow at the start but i got to fit in few lines later. Read it twice. I'd say it's simple but the meaning is deep. I mean, I like the vocab you used to describe a haunted house. GREAT man. :y:
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Re: haunted house

Postby ritchieA » Jul 28th, '09, 03:57

its ok anytym
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