Love lyrics (rapped quick)

[JPearson]

I think love lyrics should be slow n flow well, but what dya think of this quick line i wrote bout love being quick? dya think it suits the topic or just takes away the whole romantic kinda vibe?

All these emotions have frozen me and my mind is exploding just from knowing that i still love you and my love won't start slowing just keep going 'n going on until it starts overloading and pouring out of my chest because my heart's overflowing

it flows perfect i just don't think it should be so quick because of the topic

[ritchieA]

i dnt fink it matters bout the speed of the flow just that u can feel the emotion and get into the song

[JPearson]

suppose but it takes the focus away form the actual meaning of the lyrics

[ritchieA]

i spose it could do it might not though try it out