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Keystyle

Postby Solace » Jul 29th, '09, 00:42

Passionate as I'm rapping this, the readers reaction is,
How much action is packed in this paper, can I keep bashing this,
Lyrical material, readers somehow hear me flow oh so serial,
I'm on top of the world, and my thoughts can go so spherical,
Am I a miracle? No, and I've tried to stray away from saying it,
But when I'm so damn good for my age, I can't keep from spraying it,
You can delay my shit, ends up going faster than yours,
At full speed, help is what you'll need, my metaphors are better than yours,
As in...Wait...My flow is like an ocean, in it you can feel the breeze,
Going and going on...And a simple clicking of "Save" is all I need.
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Re: Keystyle

Postby Spyder » Jul 29th, '09, 02:11

ill dude really :y:
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Re: Keystyle

Postby Solace » Jul 29th, '09, 03:45

Thanks bro
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Re: Keystyle

Postby classthe_king » Jul 29th, '09, 04:43

Haha a lot of great memorable lines in their :y:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Keystyle

Postby Solace » Jul 29th, '09, 04:45

Thanks man!
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