~Untiled new song~ FeEd!

[Fa-Q]

hmm well its not bad...if your just starting out but try to expand your vocabulary and treat your rap as if it was poetry. Thats what I did and it really helped me out but if you dont want to listen to me dont and keep doing what your doing. Also work on your structure and flow which is just as important as lyrics....keep it up man

[Fa-Q]

Sorry didnt mean to offend....8 years is twice as long as I have been wring so you got me there...but Id like to see more stuff by you...maybe some of that poetry shit

[Solace]

That was nice i enjoyed it other than the bad structure but maybe thats just the way your used to it. And keep repping Canada