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In The End

Postby TRshady » Jul 28th, '09, 08:59

Wrote this a while ago to the 'In The End' linkin park piano version instrumental, don't write as much as I used to but reading some of the work posted here has inspired me, there's some major talent here :y:

sitting on a bus nothing had changed for years
except the tears that would build up and the fear
that would make you crawl up, close your eyes and appear to dissapear
keeping eyes on the front but watching from the rear
eye contact with those that would look away
reaching out to grab a hand that had been took away
for every rung you would climb, two would snap
crawling on a track taking you back to when you wouldn't react
not in touch with your emotions but you'd make their heart bleed
literally if they doubted you for a second or never believed
revenge ... only time till you get 'em back
eye for an eye, all for equality like a democrat
may leave us blind, only then will we see sense
open ears our resent at sour taste of repent
leaves us deaf, couldn't feel the pain
so wouldn't refrain from begging for forgiveness just to do it again
I'll never learn ... guess I was never taught
Destined to forver burn, down with the freedom of thought
Down with the knowledge we're taught, never get what we earn
So we climb for the top only to relapse and return ...


now what the fuck happened to the TRmixtape? :unsure:
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Re: In The End

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jul 28th, '09, 09:51

damn that was some good shit :y:
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Re: In The End

Postby ritchieA » Jul 28th, '09, 10:36

yh its pretty gd really gd flow
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Re: In The End

Postby ritchieA » Jul 28th, '09, 15:32

Good verse man...

that would make you crawl up, close your eyes and appear to dissapear
keeping eyes on the front but watching from the rear
eye contact with those that would look away
reaching out to grab a hand that had been took away


loved that part, genius :y: :8)

*EDIT* this is JPearson btw lol just realised im signed in as ritchieA :n:
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Re: In The End

Postby JPearson » Jul 28th, '09, 15:36

^^^my post^^^ :y:
It will be like finding a nail in a coal mine
haystack
oh... like finding a haystack in a coal mine
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Re: In The End

Postby Sleepy » Jul 28th, '09, 16:01

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

:confusion: :confusion:


great verse
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Re: In The End

Postby gutawafang » Jul 28th, '09, 18:28

JPearson wrote:^^^my post^^^ :y:

Hmm...

Anyways, TRshady, you the man, man!!! That was awesome. :y:
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Re: In The End

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jul 28th, '09, 18:44

ritchieA wrote:Good verse man...

that would make you crawl up, close your eyes and appear to dissapear
keeping eyes on the front but watching from the rear
eye contact with those that would look away
reaching out to grab a hand that had been took away


loved that part, genius :y: :8)

*EDIT* this is JPearson btw lol just realised im signed in as ritchieA :n:

can't you get banned for having two different screenames :unsure:
i mean thats what sacjb got banned for right?
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Re: In The End

Postby Sleepy » Jul 28th, '09, 18:48

maybe he just knows his login details
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Re: In The End

Postby JMG » Jul 29th, '09, 04:53

JPearson wrote:^^^my post^^^ :y:


wtf


anyway nice verse TR
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Re: In The End

Postby Drama Setter » Jul 29th, '09, 04:58

nice verse TR , I like the emotional in it . :y:
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Re: In The End

Postby Spyder » Jul 29th, '09, 06:01

1, JPearson bannage im smellin :shifty:

and 2 this is the first thing i have ever seen your writin TR, not bad man you should try battlin, i called u out a while ago u know :p
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Re: In The End

Postby JPearson » Jul 29th, '09, 15:23

lol ritchieA was at my house n left his account signed in...
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Re: In The End

Postby ritchieA » Jul 29th, '09, 15:32

ha lol dont worry bout it j lol hopfuly nuffin will happen
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Re: In The End

Postby Arabian Shady » Jul 30th, '09, 17:15

daym, i didnt know you used to write Tr :happy:
great verse with a realy good flow,
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