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Re: ~youknowyouloveme~

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 1st, '09, 07:47

locked in and placed in this small room i was in
that made me more crazy startin seein shit like hallucinagins
losing my sense of reality developing humor with pins
bruisin my skin jabbin them in twistin and screwin in them
and here i am rapping bout then what was happenin when
i was in there but with my rappin i'll prolly end up back in again - Best Line

Yea I liked this better than your last piece...alot more lyrically profound. I tried hearing the "who knew" but couldnt so I just put my own flow to it and it sounded dope. Yea I got compared to Em by a couple of people for my "I'm the Kinda Guy" and just brush it off. If you know your not like Em thats all that matters, fuck other people right. Good Piece
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Re: ~youknowyouloveme~

Postby gutawafang » Aug 1st, '09, 10:03

Great flow and awesome concept man. It's great if recorded so that we can tell how it flows. The rhyming's good man. Keep it up bro. :y:
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