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Diss To My Ex Girlfriend

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Re: Diss To My Ex Girlfriend

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 1st, '09, 16:02

em at the end, and mostly the song is em's kinda style, i like the lyrics, i say they're dope.
My girlfriend cheated on me too, idk she was like my first love, and she cheated on me with a friend of mine in the same fucking house i was in at a party, and i perfectly understand you. keep up the good writing
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throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses" - emzee
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Re: Diss To My Ex Girlfriend

Postby gutawafang » Aug 1st, '09, 16:04

Sounds so gangsta. Almost like G Unit style combined with Eminem's The Warning. It's pretty cool I must say. Lyrics were damn good man. Good diss. Show it to her. :)
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Re: Diss To My Ex Girlfriend

Postby JPearson » Aug 2nd, '09, 04:39

i remember the meghan days... can see why u had so much to write... shoulda added more about pierre tho he pisses me off... sick verse though... like i told ya earlier :y:
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Re: Diss To My Ex Girlfriend

Postby macdaddy019967 » Aug 2nd, '09, 09:59

dont show it to her if you do it will show that u still care about her i mean u did take time out to write it
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Re: Diss To My Ex Girlfriend

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 2nd, '09, 13:54

dude that was sick :y: pretty dope verse :smoking: :8)
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