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*I am The Best*

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Re: *I am The Best*

Postby Emadyville » Aug 3rd, '09, 14:41

Not bad, rhymes were decent but flow was eh but maybe I didn't flow-it like how you wrote it if you did to a beat for something, potential tho keep working with it :y:
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Re: *I am The Best*

Postby gutawafang » Aug 3rd, '09, 16:22

Multis were damn good, vocab and wordplay too. Hope you fix the title soon. :happy:
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