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Dont Cry For Me

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 3rd, '09, 23:28

Dont Cry for me,no need to waste tears
this is destiny,im confronting my fears
is this life for me,this shit aint clear
theres no repaying u,i feel like im delaying u
betraying u,
when im gone i hope there is someone saving you
i wanna see ur face,everytime i come home
cant leave u in this place,this cold world alone
im still here but one day ill be gone
îll disappear, i aint here for a long
there is so much to prove,
why do i have to lose?
they said i refused,but i coudlnt really choose
but i see,finally,it is not about me
life is crazy , its a mad reality
its a game to play,play it with no mess
be calm dont be stressed,be sure to pass ya test
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Re: Dont Cry For Me

Postby D'Leh » Aug 3rd, '09, 23:48

good flow, good rhymes good verse!!!! keep it coming! :y:
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Re: Dont Cry For Me

Postby Solace » Aug 4th, '09, 03:33

Honestly, no one is crying for you.
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Re: Dont Cry For Me

Postby gutawafang » Aug 4th, '09, 04:03

Rhymes are good. Flow and multis ain't there. Kepp improving homie. :y:
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Re: Dont Cry For Me

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 4th, '09, 11:31

Solace wrote:Honestly, no one is crying for you.

dude u sound rediculous, "if i say i killed somebody in my lyrics,and u believe that,that im killing u :o " Lol
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Re: Dont Cry For Me

Postby Solace » Aug 4th, '09, 17:24

Fine I'll actually feed it then. Gutawafang is right, barely any flow and multies. Rhymes, i dont see how they were good since I'd expect you to have multies. Couldnt feel the emotion at all.
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Re: Dont Cry For Me

Postby Solace » Aug 4th, '09, 17:36

Life for me-cry for me; wasnt a complex multie and they were spaced apart but Ill give him that. Repaying you, delaying you, betraying you etc, just feels like a writer is going on and on.

Disappear;im still here, wack.

to prove; to lose; choose, refused; All very beginner.

Scotty you have to admit Le Tunisien is writing like a beginner still and nothing about that was poetic or good. Every "multi" in that was wack and very simple something I was writing at in my first 2 months. I'll give him life forme-cry for me but thats all.

And that's why I wouldn't feed it first and just said, Honestly, no one is crying for you because I know my feed would be taken as "hating" from Tunisien and you'd have to hop on dick and try to prove my opinion wrong.
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Re: Dont Cry For Me

Postby Solace » Aug 4th, '09, 17:41

Oh please, I'm the one who CREATED that bandwagon. Ain't no reason to jump in it ;)

But on the real, for the amount of time this dude as been writing nothing has impressed me and that's the truth. I didn't like anything about this piece, and if gutawafang dropped it i'd tell him its shit. If James dropped it, MC Anonymous dropped it, Ice Killa dropped or you dropped it, i'd say it was shit. It's not the person it's the piece.
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Re: Dont Cry For Me

Postby Solace » Aug 4th, '09, 17:43

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
Solace wrote:Oh please, I'm the one who CREATED that bandwagon. Ain't no reason to jump in it ;)

But on the real, for the amount of time this dude as been writing nothing has impressed me and that's the truth. I didn't like anything about this piece, and if gutawafang dropped it i'd tell him its shit. If James dropped it, MC Anonymous dropped it, Ice Killa dropped or you dropped it, i'd say it was shit. It's not the person it's the piece.


i wasn't referring to your feed, the feed was honest. i was referring to the first comment you put.

Oh that, I want to just fuck with him and make him diss me again.

Those were the good old TR days; to me at least. :sweating:
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Re: Dont Cry For Me

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 5th, '09, 02:36

oh shit,next time ill think about impressin solace when i write

but uhm ,i really write to just tell something by rhyming not really looking for complex or good multis,
just having fun on writin quick Lines :y:
and hey my mother is crying for me lol

and btw Solace u are epiphany right?
lol back in the days was havin fun dissin people on audio,never knew u found that fun or good lol
"Like Epi,hes next to Be,sniped tonight,plus i might,get in a fight,and rape him with no light" LOL
"Epi u aint fine , so stick to your design, imma talk to one so the rest stay benind,....." XD remember those lines haha

but damn i lost those songs,i formated my pc , everthing gone,even the beats i prepared for ur next diss xD huhuhuhu
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Re: Dont Cry For Me

Postby Solace » Aug 5th, '09, 02:38

Alright man I get cha.
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