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Postby D'Leh » Aug 5th, '09, 06:08

Let me tell you a story, and it wont be nice
its really fucked up, you dont wanna hear it twice
it's really complex, let me simplify a rhyme
you're gonna search but you really cant find the light
theres a rope, a neck, just before the fight
a little girl telling God its about the time
killher self, yes killher self, yes that's right
but let flor sing the chorus for yall tonight

esta es la historia
que queda en la memoria
q pasa a la historia
que es llamada sonia
esta es la historia q alguna ves escuchaste
viviste sentiste y luego lamentaste


a little vrse mix english with spanish im really bored
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Re: historia

Postby gutawafang » Aug 5th, '09, 06:09

HAHAHA. Can tell you're DAMN bored! :happy: Quite good rhymes though. Learn as you go along in the forum. :y:
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Re: historia

Postby D'Leh » Aug 5th, '09, 06:12

haha im pretty bad at this lol
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Re: historia

Postby gutawafang » Aug 5th, '09, 06:22

zurditoshady wrote:haha im pretty bad at this lol

Improve on your English I suggest. :flower:
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Re: historia

Postby D'Leh » Aug 5th, '09, 06:24

yeah maybe haha but im still bad :sweating:
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Re: historia

Postby gutawafang » Aug 5th, '09, 06:28

zurditoshady wrote:yeah maybe haha but im still bad :sweating:

Don't look down on yourself man.
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Re: historia

Postby D'Leh » Aug 5th, '09, 06:28

im learning in here
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Re: historia

Postby Emadyville » Aug 5th, '09, 06:41

gutawafang wrote:
zurditoshady wrote:haha im pretty bad at this lol

Improve on your English I suggest. :flower:


Yeah keep workin at it you'll get better, this wasn't a bad start :y:
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