Taoist Lyrics

[Taoist]

First topic on this forum, I'm a pretty big eminem fan, anyways, heres my first rap I wrote in like a few years or more lol.

Mental Institution-
These lyrics pour into your skeletal system/
And solidifies your body like crystal/
It's not practical to battle me in your dreams or realistically/
Because my beat has obliterated you
And reverberated throughout your body/
I might be a nobody but writing is more than just a hobby/
Mess with me and I'll find you/
Even in a vacant hotel lobby/
Throwing sticks and stones that break your bones along with your weak ass metaphors/
Whenever you try to hold me I relax and slip your grip/
Whenever you try to run away I contract and force you down/
As a matter of fact, I have an amazing act for every scenario/
Infinite strategies and paradigms that reflect all your rhymes/
A candid lyricist with jagged edges and an iron fist/
Causing slit wrists/
Through my negativity , creativity, and brevity of action/
Malefaction is the result of my schizophrenia/
In a constant state of mania/
Trust me I'm not playing with ya/
I'll strike you in 3 pressure points simultaneously/
Walk away anonymously as you collapse a week later/
I'm not a player just a corrupt mayor who'll summon acid rain/
And cause pain to every living thing and curse with god's name in vain/
Even commission a plumber to fuck up all the water mains so you drink water thats chemically stained/
And beat the shit out of you till you get maimed/
Realize that I'm untamed and was raised to speak my brain waves/

[Chorus] (I sorta made this up on the fly, i dont even know if it'll work with a beat lol.)
Yo I was sent for execution/
I finally left and found peace in a mental institution/
Never thought I would make it/
But I found restitution/

[ritchieA]

i like itpreety gd keep goin you should ryt more

[lilrossy]

yeh man, it's was alrite. parts of it the flow was off and it didn't really rhyme. but besides that it wasn't to bad. can see ya got sum talent, jus need a bit mo practice.
Btw i really liked this line, thought it was pretty cool.

Even commission a plumber to fuck up all the water mains so you drink water thats chemically stained/

Keep it up man.

[JPearson]

i did like it just couldn't catch the flow... u made sure it flows to something?

[gutawafang]

Are you an old man?

Anyways, that was awesome vocab. The flow was off sometimes cuz maybe the rhymes are not so good.

Awesome vocab but still it's simple. Not worth reading again for me. But you got the potential man.

[Taoist]

Part 1 of a hopefully 3 part rap, still thinking about a chorus( Note: I did this song to the beat from 3a.m)

When you enter through this dimension/
Don't be afraid to lose, don't be afraid to drop your tension/
Forgot to mention you'll see your progression slowly digress/
As the stress slowly consumes your soul and creeps through your arteries/
You begin to see the world from a third-party perspective/
I know it's hectic as the lactic acid build ups/
Along with the nausea and subsequent throw up/
Just let it flow, I understand your fear of never wanting to grow old/
Here it is completely desolate/
You might believe you need society but you are just desperate/
Sharp object in eyes, dead bodies eroding , covered in flies , children gutted with knives/
Is this an illusion or a vision of the future/
A mutilated and polluted environment/
The touching of the forbidden fruit, the augment of human nature/
Not even literature can save us, flesh turns to dust/
I still must run through the darkness of the forest and escape before it's too late/
Or maybe that is just my fate/

[neversnooze]

F.U and my hatred traveled right up your a** leaving me in peace and harmony

[JPearson]

i agree the vocab used was on a different level! i liked this one, all a verse should be well done man

[Taoist]

Part 2 of 3 of this rap

The interior of the house begins to decay/
The absence of light becomes superior/
As the children run away from the murder of the day/
Mirrors no longer express reflections/
Even minor diseases cause infections/
Don't run I know it's regrettable, but inevitable/
Forced to dismember in a torture chamber but soon I won't even remember/
The victims I killed as I drink their bodily secretions mixed from a blender/
Soon I'll have electronic wiring in my brain/
Demonic voices screaming making me go insane/
Sitting here undergoing aversion therapy/
This imagery is terribly affecting me/
Making me watch his eyeballs get cut open by scalpels/
While having his digestive system removed/
Corrosive chemicals being used/
Every single body part being abused/
Injecting morphine to any amphetamine I can grab/
From stimulants to anti-depressants/
Need an intoxicant to over come my subconscious/
All these nightmares make me obnoxious/

[JPearson]

again the vocab was impressive.... can u post audio?

[Taoist]

When you enter through this dimension/
Don't be afraid to lose, don't be afraid to drop your tension/
Forgot to mention you'll see your progression slowly digress/
As the stress slowly consumes your soul and creeps through your arteries/
You begin to see the world from a third-party perspective/
I know it's hectic as the lactic acid build ups/
Along with the nausea and subsequent throw up/
Just let it flow, I understand your fear of never wanting to grow old/
Here it is completely desolate/
You might believe you need society but you are just desperate/
Sharp objects in eyes, dead bodies eroding , covered in flies , children gutted with knives/
Is this an illusion or a vision of the future/
A mutilated and polluted environment/
The touching of the forbidden fruit, the augment of human nature/
Not even literature can save us, flesh turns to dust/
I still must run through the darkness of the forest and escape before it's too late/
Or maybe that is just my fate/

--

The interior of the house begins to decay/
The absence of light becomes superior/
As the children run away from the murder of the day/
Mirrors no longer express reflections/
Even minor diseases cause infections/
Don't run I know it's regrettable, but inevitable/
Forced to dismember in a torture chamber but soon I won't even remember/
The victims I killed as I drink their bodily secretions mixed from a blender/
Soon I'll have electronic wiring in my brain/
Demonic voices screaming making me go insane/
Sitting here undergoing aversion therapy/
This imagery is terribly affecting me/
Making me watch his eyeballs get cut open by scalpels/
While having his digestive system removed/
Corrosive chemicals being used/
Every single body part being abused/
Injecting morphine to any amphetamine I can grab/
From stimulants to anti-depressants/
Need an intoxicant to over come my subconscious/
All these nightmares make me obnoxious/

---

As the heads hang from the ceiling/
My skin starts peeling/
Here comes the end of humanity/
The beginning of vanity/
Throughout the world a self-installed instability/
As we fall victim to our own jurisdiction/
However my words are not fiction/
Human degeneration/
Destruction of a nation/
Through my contemplation I see a solution in sight/
Although it is difficult to deal with this curse/
I still believe we can fix the universe/
By dropping a lyrical verse/