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Re: J Roc Diss

Postby JPearson » Aug 1st, '09, 02:45

that was actually fucking sick... in every way a verse can be, never seen summin like that from ya before :y: :y:
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Re: J Roc Diss

Postby Solace » Aug 1st, '09, 03:13

I see you put some nice work into this cause it was dope. I loved the multies especially cause I ain't good with them and I think you pulled off some dope ones I wouldn't have thought of. Some very very dope punches haha and it hooked me in from the start (something every writer needs). Great job Scott 9.5/10 for a diss.
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Re: J Roc Diss

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 6th, '09, 13:28

sick i love it :smoking:
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Re: J Roc Diss

Postby classthe_king » Aug 6th, '09, 17:38

Really dope verse, great diss but where is J Roc? I haven't seen him since this dropped :shifty:
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