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Ready for War Part 3. (The Final Battle)

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Ready for War Part 3. (The Final Battle)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 6th, '09, 18:59

I have had no free time lately :n: and have been working on this for a long time. Tell me what ya think

My crazy flow admits decay to your brain like it is radioactive
Yo baby knows that it will burn you cause my hazy flows that sick
You used to go hard most of the time but your ratio back flipped
And now your big rhymes blow more then a fellatio wit a fat chick
My ways evoke madness and I can tell this verse is driving you nuts
Cause your courage to strike back is gone like I was frying ya guts
I’m depriving you of, with pure fright, your right to flow to this beat
Your finding out you shouldn’t whine about your woes when you speak
Everybody loves me when I rap and even you noticed its heat
Cause I every time I spit you’re standin like I roasted ya seat
You know ya shits weak and don’t even be pretendin you had that
You can’t be more of a fag if you had a teddy bear and a back pack
I am not callin myself a punch line rapper that was just a lil jab jab
So please could somebody get his sad ass off of this wack track
It’s my time to shine so watch as im makin these rhymes combine
Into the hidden jewel you didn’t fool with that sublime mind

Get ready...cause im ready for war

A rich white rapper in a ripe chapter with a wrecked mind
A deranged nuisance makin more strange music then Tech N9ne
My complex rhymes will have your brain flippin over vertically
Watch where you step so you won’t be trippin over this murdered beat
I’ll be rippin ya surgically, tearing your body limb from limb
I’ll be racking ya rear as soon as your rapping career begins to end
When my pen contends it will step on the stage and knock ya out
We’re in the octagon, I dropped a bomb so ya better watch ya mouth
Drop ya route, cause you ain’t makin it im lyrically superior
You not hearin me mayne, my empirical reign will show you’re inferior
You don’t have what it takes to make it in the game but it makes
For comedy when you grab the mic and try to get it on wit me
So watch and learn cause soon this verse will be hauntin ya dreams
You’ll toss and turn in your bed while im overhead halting ya screams
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Ready for War Part 3. (The Final Battle)

Postby JPearson » Aug 6th, '09, 19:11

Lol i actually loved this piece man, good flow, ryhmes n everything n i acually laughed... nice one :y: :smoking:
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haystack
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Re: Ready for War Part 3. (The Final Battle)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 6th, '09, 19:15

JPearson wrote:Lol i actually loved this piece man, good flow, ryhmes n everything n i acually laughed... nice one :y: :smoking:


Thank you :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Ready for War Part 3. (The Final Battle)

Postby JPearson » Aug 6th, '09, 19:16

all good man.... fellatio with a fat chick lol classic :y:
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Re: Ready for War Part 3. (The Final Battle)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 6th, '09, 19:17

haha, thanks for checkin it out. :worship:
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Re: Ready for War Part 3. (The Final Battle)

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 7th, '09, 01:25

:worship: Some talent in CW... I love it
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Ready for War Part 3. (The Final Battle)

Postby Noeezy » Aug 7th, '09, 02:08

JPearson wrote:all good man.... fellatio with a fat chick lol classic :y:


haha
the whole 2nd verse was pretty dope too
keep it up bro :b:
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Re: Ready for War Part 3. (The Final Battle)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 7th, '09, 03:20

Thank you everyone :worship: :worship: :worship:
Didn't expect so much positve feed.
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