Fat Fuck

by **D'Leh** » Aug 6th, '09, 19:23

Listen close to the shit im about to tell
me and a fat chick fuckin in a room hotel
big booty on my dick, yeah!is round as hell
nut that fat ass is makin my cock just break
i met her in Da Club, but not 50's one
only fat girls, big tits, grand pusyy, BOUM!!!
she check on me 1, twice, man i've to fuck her now
she smiles me, but is ugly as Krusty' Clown
no disrespect to you krusty, but i've to puke now

that round big ass walked with me and stock me in the bath
Shes' like cmon skinny boy stick that dick in my ass
mmm no honey i'll guess i pass.,nah lets go fuck that ass
let met tell you ill fuck you, but once not twice
fell that ass up wwith a little of rice, Pshyke
maybe i like fat chicks, shit fuck.i cant deny
im gonna masturbate with this song, its mine.

well a verse i just made up, nothing special, i guess im still pretty bad at this, well tell me what you think!

by **drasticlyhated** » Aug 6th, '09, 19:25

lol funy but awsome at the same time

by **emzee-frenzy** » Aug 6th, '09, 19:31

im gonna masturbate with this song, its mine.
LMFAO :laughing:

by **classthe_king** » Aug 6th, '09, 19:32

...made me laugh, alot, but not a good writing piece at all.

"she check on me 1, twice, man i've to fuck her now"
And just to let you know, you can only use i've when your saying i have got. Like you could say ive got to fuck her now, but what you said people dont use when speaking english

by **D'Leh** » Aug 6th, '09, 19:36

thanks man i dont even know that really thanks!

and thanks everybody for the feedback

by **emzee-frenzy** » Aug 6th, '09, 19:37

classthe_king wrote:...made me laugh, alot, but not a good writing piece at all.

"she check on me 1, twice, man i've to fuck her now"
And just to let you know, you can only use i've when your saying i have got. Like you could say ive got to fuck her now, but what you said people dont use when speaking english
Quote emzee-frenzy Re: Fat Fuck

hey , give him a break, he lives in Argentina, not everybody is from the states and some people sometimes do mistakes.

by **classthe_king** » Aug 6th, '09, 19:38

i know, i wasn't trying to be a dick about it, just help him out.

by **D'Leh** » Aug 6th, '09, 19:45

he was tryn to help me and thanks for the defence man_!!!

by **Ice_Scarred** » Aug 6th, '09, 21:21

I'MMMMM CUMMMMMINNNNGGG!!!!!

lol This song was super Orgasmic..which is a compliment....a great one.

Good shit dude! :y:

by **Noeezy** » Aug 6th, '09, 21:47

rofl
i dont even know what to say

by **BILI** » Aug 6th, '09, 22:14

zurditoshady wrote:Listen close to the shit im about to tell
me and a fat chick fuckin in a room hotel
big booty on my dick, yeah!is round as hell
nut that fat ass is makin my cock just break
i met her in Da Club, but not 50's one
only fat girls, big tits, grand pusyy, BOUM!!!
she check on me 1, twice, man i've to fuck her now
she smiles me, but is ugly as Krusty' Clown
no disrespect to you krusty, but i've to puke now

that round big ass walked with me and stock me in the bath
Shes' like cmon skinny boy stick that dick in my ass
mmm no honey i'll guess i pass.,nah lets go fuck that ass
let met tell you ill fuck you, but once not twice
fell that ass up wwith a little of rice, Pshyke
maybe i like fat chicks, shit fuck.i cant deny
im gonna masturbate with this song, its mine.

well a verse i just made up, nothing special, i guess im still pretty bad at this, well tell me what you think!

lmao dope

by **D'Leh** » Aug 7th, '09, 02:01

thanks guys...really.!!!!!! :y:

by **gutawafang** » Aug 7th, '09, 11:36

The flow was AWESOME and the concept's great too! :y:

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