The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Keep In Line. DISS

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Keep In Line. DISS

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 7th, '09, 17:33

Second Round KO, one first to block out
face from the earth, dirt you taste now
calling other people terrorists when you are one
Tunibitch, eat like tunafish intestines son
here's the question son, what the fuck you think?
talk shit to a general you get the fleet
I'm just going soft so let me speak
simple words that I say will test you B
talking shit in shady shots, incest pictures blazing hot
with crazy spots of V neck sweaters, dracula's a tuni cock
now who be shot, in the booth when I'm spittin the truth
when rippin is lose, I'll tear rainbow fabrics you're wearing too
telling other men to blow you, now who's the faggot?
I'll leave you in the dirt getting screwed by maggots
only shady shots you have is your bitch ass signature
and you a bitch in a red coat like nazi literature
Acting like you got a life, that's all it is, an act
So fuck you mother, this is just a light track...
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


Image
User avatar
MC Anonymous
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2385
Joined: Nov 8th, '08, 15:27
Location: Omnipresent being, sees all.....
Gender: Male

Re: Keep In Line. DISS

Postby Solace » Aug 7th, '09, 17:35

Own :y:
Image
User avatar
Solace
Bad Influence
Bad Influence
 
Posts: 19901
Joined: Apr 25th, '08, 03:12
Gender: Male

Re: Keep In Line. DISS

Postby mcZu » Aug 7th, '09, 17:42

You ripped him his 939567821938929th hole.
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

Follow Me!

McZu's Blog!
User avatar
mcZu
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 7297
Joined: Jun 17th, '08, 14:21
Location: Rotterdam
Gender: Male

Re: Keep In Line. DISS

Postby James R. » Aug 7th, '09, 17:43

Lmfao I think each of the generals has pwned his ass lricall at least 3 times
User avatar
James R.
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 5044
Joined: Apr 25th, '07, 20:31
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
Gender: Male

Re: Keep In Line. DISS

Postby Solace » Aug 7th, '09, 18:07

Watch him come in here like "tht wasd fkn shet u suck ur all gay u have no lifes!!"
Image
User avatar
Solace
Bad Influence
Bad Influence
 
Posts: 19901
Joined: Apr 25th, '08, 03:12
Gender: Male

Re: Keep In Line. DISS

Postby mcZu » Aug 7th, '09, 18:09

^lol
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

Follow Me!

McZu's Blog!
User avatar
mcZu
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 7297
Joined: Jun 17th, '08, 14:21
Location: Rotterdam
Gender: Male

Re: Keep In Line. DISS

Postby D'Leh » Aug 7th, '09, 18:28

nice diss man really nice lol!! :y: :b: ....... i love the flow structure and multis in there....thats whats miss in my raps if you want to check it....look for fat fuck finished version
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
User avatar
D'Leh
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 980
Joined: May 9th, '09, 18:07
Location: San Rafael, Argentina
Gender: Male

Re: Keep In Line. DISS

Postby Almostlity » Aug 7th, '09, 18:31

That was ''fkn'' nice :smoking:
Trimss wrote:> Alm goat
> Alm still goat

> Alm goat


Kill You wrote:Almostlity GOAT poster omg
User avatar
Almostlity
DA GAWD
DA GAWD
 
Posts: 10623
Joined: Jan 4th, '09, 14:48
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users