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Poor and Pissed

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 7th, '09, 03:46

With the street shit I'm number 1, second to none
when weapons is spun, ye head is done, severed and gunned
Lyrically I got my face on money like presidents
More present then present tence wrapped in a present then
expose your shit, implode my lips
blast like clips to ya ribs rippin ya shit
my spitting is sick, I got the witness protection
the sickness infection, morphine intestines
memory supression, detection depression
cause I gotta kill another fucker for a lesson
keep you guessin, when I'm gonna kill you next
Ifill the text with life, so you feel my breath
I'll peel your chest with my nails, drink the blood in pails
hammer hands to ya heart, till my fingers sail
I so broke, I'll rob a baby for their pinky ring
then amputee her mommy rape her body, pawn her bling
Cause I don't give a fuck, I need some food on my plate
abusing is late, using you like spewin booze when it's late
Living life is a struggle when I drown in some puddles
brought down with rebuttles, and apollo space shuttle
tell me you have it made, I'll rape you next
wear your skin as a costume and take your checks....
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Poor and Pissed

Postby Solace » Aug 7th, '09, 03:47

You know what I think about this. Dope, and i fuckin loved the way this ended. Made me think off...Rock Bottom mixed with some more anger.
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Re: Poor and Pissed

Postby Emadyville » Aug 7th, '09, 04:39

Solace wrote:You know what I think about this. Dope, and i fuckin loved the way this ended. Made me think off...Rock Bottom mixed with some more anger.


He said it, good piece :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


I love you Daren
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Re: Poor and Pissed

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 7th, '09, 05:43

With the street shit I'm number 1, second to none
when weapons is spun, ye head is done, severed and gunned
Lyrically I got my face on money like presidents
More present then present tence wrapped in a present then

holy shit dude....that was crayz
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Re: Poor and Pissed

Postby classthe_king » Aug 7th, '09, 20:41

haha like i said earlier, straight fire, expecially the lines Fa-q pointed out.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Poor and Pissed

Postby macdaddy019967 » Aug 7th, '09, 20:46

damn your fucking amazing :o
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Re: Poor and Pissed

Postby Spyder » Aug 7th, '09, 23:17

love this man, told u bout some of the lines on aim, crazy bro :y:
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Re: Poor and Pissed

Postby classthe_king » Aug 7th, '09, 23:20

Spyder wrote:love this man, told u bout some of the lines on aim, crazy bro :y:


you have aim? what is it
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Poor and Pissed

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 7th, '09, 23:49

:worship: Thanks homies
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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