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I wrote this when I was high as a kite

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I wrote this when I was high as a kite

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 9th, '09, 03:25

Smoke swirls and cloaks pearls
til clams fill dams
and turn trees to winter
and water freezes winter
My oath to goals
is like a fish drowning in both bowls
weed smoking flowers
they see floating towers
paper planes saying fly papers
all sly daters die rapers
the idle motion is my vital potion
here comes a tidal wave
its heaven and Im dying in a bible grave
hopefully I have inner grace
runnin from demons and not the winner of the race
heading north but backtrackin south
my baby teeth are attackin my mouth
the tooth fairy, is a slueth rarely
she never robs the youth farely
in exchange for about a quarter
Im living in a brick house without the mortar
so tell me how a lake crys
can I see through snake eyes
tell me how a snow flake dries
tell me how a mannequin whos fake dies
is this gibberish
or maybe whoever wins is the bigger fish
philosophy underdiscovered
does a man who dies miss his lover
even though hes just a kiss abover her
my eyes keep me back to sleep
all I see is leaping black sheep
I have no fingers on my hand
I have no singers in my band

I had like 3 pages but this is all I could make out lol
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Re: I wrote this when I was high as a kite

Postby classthe_king » Aug 9th, '09, 18:07

haha wtf :confusion: . Lmao, made me laugh.
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Re: I wrote this when I was high as a kite

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 9th, '09, 19:08

classthe_king wrote:haha wtf :confusion: . Lmao, made me laugh.

lol yea i was spaced out...
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