The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

The High Exhaulted

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Re: The High Exhaulted

Postby mcZu » Aug 9th, '09, 17:17

my shine causes partial blindness call me ya hiness
you'll take an L like the guy who shot Hrlem's Finest


Dope way to start :y:

Liked it. But some bars were meh, flow seemed to fluctuate halfway through.. but I enjoyed reading it, keep it up :b:
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

Follow Me!

McZu's Blog!
User avatar
mcZu
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 7297
Joined: Jun 17th, '08, 14:21
Location: Rotterdam
Gender: Male

Re: The High Exhaulted

Postby gutawafang » Aug 9th, '09, 17:36

brethin heat, so i dont care wut ya biches thoughtt a me
my discography leav ya centsless like ta economy
BEST!

Your wordplay and nameplay is DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN good man. Keep it up homie. :y: :y: :y:
ADD ME ON PS4: gutawafang
Currently playing: Destiny
Image
TR Rap Battle Record: 23-8
User avatar
gutawafang
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 9474
Joined: Dec 13th, '07, 08:01
Location: Lion City
Gender: Male

Re: The High Exhaulted

Postby classthe_king » Aug 9th, '09, 18:00

:worship: Everything you put out has been fire lately. That line gutawafang put out was dope but these 4 lines just amazed me
ya wack bars waste, my literacy, time, and bandwith
ya track's like a fag's ass, all that shit gets crammed in
i'll jam quick, drop a 100 bars if you're rappin tight
otherwise, run and hide, then Scottie Pippen and pass ta mic

Do you have aim, id like to talk to you sometime?
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
User avatar
classthe_king
Addict
Addict
 
Posts: 14163
Joined: Feb 12th, '09, 02:30
Location: Ohio
Gender: Male

Re: The High Exhaulted

Postby classthe_king » Aug 9th, '09, 18:05

I don't know what DOA stands for besides death of autotune lol, but right now i think your top 5 on tr for sure.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
User avatar
classthe_king
Addict
Addict
 
Posts: 14163
Joined: Feb 12th, '09, 02:30
Location: Ohio
Gender: Male

Re: The High Exhaulted

Postby BILI » Aug 10th, '09, 00:00

wow pretty dope drop...I loved it the rhymes,flow and wordplay is fuckin dope :y: :y:
Image
User avatar
BILI
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 9998
Joined: Mar 26th, '09, 16:05
Location: Croatia
Gender: Male

Re: The High Exhaulted

Postby BILI » Aug 10th, '09, 00:22

Coleon wrote:
BILI wrote:wow pretty dope drop...I loved it the rhymes,flow and wordplay is fuckin dope :y: :y:


thank ya man :y:


I <3feed

np man
Image
User avatar
BILI
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 9998
Joined: Mar 26th, '09, 16:05
Location: Croatia
Gender: Male

Re: The High Exhaulted

Postby D'Leh » Aug 10th, '09, 00:45

dope dude!!! :b:
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
User avatar
D'Leh
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 980
Joined: May 9th, '09, 18:07
Location: San Rafael, Argentina
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users